Question In many places students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the

Nowadays, the fast-paced, high-pressure life requires us to adopt the as best schedule we can to withstand and progress. Some individuals complain about the waking hour of children and teenagers in school time. However, it is more beneficial for people to wake up as soon as they can to implement their day hours to gain success in both career and personal life due to two reasons which I will demonstrate in this essay.
First, evidently, it is best for children to avoid being awake at night times as it has inevitable negative effects on their health and growth status. Also, health care providers indicated that sleeping before 10 P.M can regulate and balance the hormonal secretion in our bodies. Therefore, when students sleep before the mentioned time and wake up early can start their day with sunrise, which absolutely can boost their mood throughout the day. A friend of mine who was a mother of two children was diagnosed with severe depression last year. She always refused to sleep when her children slept as they had to wake up early to go to school. Doctors told her the primary treatment in her procedure is to obtain a firm schedule for waking hours. Furthermore, after a few months, apparent signs of mental health appeared in her attitudes.
Secondly, to maintain proper self-discipline, students must be taught in their initial years of entering society. This discipline can help them progress in their lives as it is one of the essential traits of every successful person. Moreover, chaotic personalities that have not learned to have a daily plan of waking hours, sleeping time, and lack personal discipline are considered to be less fortunate or more depressed in their lifetime. Plus, CEOs or human resource managers are more likely to pick punctual employees among job seekers. Therefore, being on time can incline children's chances of finding a job in the future.
In conclusion, to my mind, prompting children to be present early in the morning in schools is utterly beneficial for them. It is because it will help them with their physical health, and it will provide a significant opportunity for them to learn to use the best of their daytime by sleeping early in the night.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ers indicated that sleeping before 10 P.M can regulate and balance the hormonal s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92225201072 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71394460733 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581769436997 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.846938988 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155749806896 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491723276078 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541473758121 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971077191668 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350312914343 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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