Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to take copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible. Write to the director of the school and request them documents.
Dear Dr Alister,
Kindly recall my participation in the two-month summer course on ‘Presentation Skills’ in July last year at Sydney College of Australia, Sydney.
Earlier, I had underwent this course to improve my presentation skills in my career especially during business meets and also in order to succeed in interviews. Eventually, I have successfully passed an interview for the position of ‘Business Analyst’ recently. Since I mentioned about this exclusive short-term course from Sydney College in my resume when I applied for this job, now my employer has requested me to provide copies of my grades and assignments for the verification of my academic credentials and for other formalities and procedures as per the company norms.
Owing to the above situation, I kindly request you to scan and send a copies of my certificate, mark sheet and assignments to this email address as soon as possible. I would be grateful if you could do the needful at the earliest.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Krrish
- In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree? 90
- To solve the over-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree? 80
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what exten 80
- Second attempt by me Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single global currency that we all use Do you agree or disagree with this statement Would a single currency cause any problems Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 83
- Nowadays people normally stretch their work hours and get stressed than before. What are the reasons for this? What employers can do to make people’s life easier? 80
Kindly recall my participation in the two-month summer course on ‘Presentation Skills’
I am writing this letter to kindly recall my participation in the two-month summer course ‘Presentation Skills’
Sentence: Earlier, I had underwent this course to improve my presentation skills in my career especially during business meets and also in order to succeed in interviews.
Description: A verb 'to have', past tense is not usually followed by a verb, past tense
Suggestion: Refer to had and underwent
send a copies of my certificate,
send a copy of my certificate,
send the copies of my certificate,
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 172 200
No. of Characters: 849 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.621 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.936 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.924 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.685 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.222 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.813 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4