Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?
People are often considered successful if they earn a lot of money. Being affluent definitely can be termed as a better way to define success than any other way. But, we should not forget that for certain number of people being satisfied with what they have is as important as money to define success.
Money has always been defined as an epitome of success. People who are well-off have an ability not just to secure their futures, but even their day-to-day lives. For instance, people with ample amount of money buy big mansions just for the status symbol. Not only that, they don 't even stay in the bungalows that they buy. For many people this type of life where there is no shortage of money is often termed successful.
Even though many people relate money with success, there are still few of them who don 't give such importance to wealth. The measurement of success can be defined as how content the people are with what they have. Not everyone can be billionaire, but having the right mindset and approach to live a happy life plays a magnificent role. For instance, there are monks who attain nirvana are considered successful as they boycott the worldly desires and live peacefully. Apart from having monetary benefits, there are other factors that define success.
Money is no doubt very powerful factor in defining somebody's success. It is difficult to lead a hurdle free life without money. But, success can also be measured by the level of satisfaction one possesses with whatever they own.
Comments
Very nice essay. The subject…
Very nice essay. The subject you are addressing is really delicate and in my opinion, this answer is fully personal. One can consider that a person has not succeeded in life and yet he considers it a success. I, for example, make a lot of money teaching people how to get around self-exclusion. When some people see me, they consider me successful. But deep down, I know that I am missing enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, apart from, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8416988417 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3824928058 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.150096297 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239837849815 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913653965478 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692793768937 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165140995564 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563864024409 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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