The graph below shows the sale of five types of items in four different seasons in a departmental store in the US in 2011. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the five kinds of products in four different seasons in a particular departmental store in the US in 2011.
Overall, the sale of US department stores in autumn has significantly increased among four seasons. Meanwhile, the product bought in a US store in spring and winter had decreased but summer was static.
By 2011, the sales of US department stores had five types of items including women and men's clothes, sports equipment, cosmetics and jewellery. To begin with the winter season, the women's clothes were higher than other areas, remaining about 40,000 dollars. Moreover, this price has significantly increased from 40,000 dollars to 110,0000 dollars in autumn.
On the other hand, the other areas such as men’s clothes and sport equipment was lowest and not higher than 50,000 dollars. In addition, the products such as cosmetics and jewelry were most developed in autumn at about 41,000 and 43,000 dollars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
... cosmetics and jewellery. To begin with the winter season, the womens clothes were higher than ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41401273885 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64709615968 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1819485171 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186409244994 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832521132716 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105402990668 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113743380715 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111803009274 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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