Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people work for the same company all through their career life, others work for more than one firm before retiring. There are various factors that necessitate these behaviors.
Those who work for their first employer all through their working life do so because they found good working conditions at the workplace. When a man has enough earnings to take care of his needs, he remains relaxed and does not feel the urge to change employment. There is also, an additional motivation that comes with proper career progression plan for staff. Such employees feel at home and go on to spend their entire career life with the employer. For example, Mr. Emma spent 35 year of his life with his first employer - EEC Energy. During his retirement party, one of his juniors asked why he remained with EEC all through his career life and he answered that good working conditions coupled with rest of mind made him commit his life to EEC. He went on to explain that EEC showed him from the beginning that that he will have a great career with them, and coupled with good pay, he was convinced to commit his future into their hands and till that very moment has never seen any reason to regret his decision.
On the other hand, those in support of moving from one organisation to the other believe that by doing so, one is able to get huge pay rise within a short period. When employees interview with another company, they use their current wage to negotiate higher pay with the new firm. Some times the rise could be as high as 20% and if the employer could move to five of such jobs in two years, his salary will increase by 100%. Such an increase may not be achieved by staying with the same employer, even with a very high performance. In addition to the increments in earnings, these people are also assigned more senior roles as they move.
In conclusion, I believe it is better to remain with the same employer provided the remunerations and working conditions are right. Business owners can encourage their employees to remain with them by matching whatever offer they get and providing them with good working atmosphere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... that EEC showed him from the beginning that that he will have a great career with them, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224938875306 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.163814180929 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0831295843521 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0317848410758 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0831295843521 0.0437548338989 190% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.141809290954 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0366748166259 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31872723711 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342298288509 0.0326793684256 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.078239608802 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0146699266504 0.021408717616 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0195599022005 0.011925033212 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2134.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 377.0 316.048096192 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66047745358 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291777188329 0.374742101984 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198938992042 0.28420135186 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.129973474801 0.203846283523 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0822281167109 0.137316102897 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31872723711 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549071618037 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 61.6174243123 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5625 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6837691125 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.375 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7743622355 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.4563992042 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.44736842105 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295617833692 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113268549671 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118934425499 0.0668466124924 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51246295302 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154096133098 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116063104269 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808337609777 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260220082086 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0653856911893 0.0638462369009 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217505207285 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836229670951 0.058150111329 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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