Many people believe that government should have to pay for education and health service. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Elementary level of the health care support and sound educational base often lead to prosperity endowment in our society. Nevertheless, some of the traditionalists claim that government, only, have to put efforts in order to ameliorate financial hurdles of Health and education. To my mind, not just only governments but private organisations also have to step in after a certain level. Firstly, where the government can balance the basic needs of unprivileged once, and, secondly private sector can work after provision of better Quality Services.
To begin with, the government must have to look after impoverished population, in order to provide elementary education and essential medical services, at free of cost. By this, the government has high chances to secure the future in terms of the economic benefits from people and can slaughter undeserving medical problems. Seen in this light, the government plays an indispensable role to lift up the lifestyle of society especially for depriving once.
On the other hand, private companies are able to cater this aforementioned concern effectively due to cut-throat market competition to provide better services. not just this ,but some of the Wealthier Societies can bear their educational and health-related expense, wholly. Consider, for example, private hospitals and self-financed education institutes are majorly preferable among the Indian communities due to their quality service within time constraints. Thus, as per my notion, after a certain level privatisation and an individual person should step in to take initiatives.
on the practical note, I suggest that Government and private companies can work as a joint venture. Eventually, a combined effort of them aids to diminish negative aspects such as unemployment and illiteracy rate. Moreover, sometimes it will increase our cultural value ,even, among society.
in a nutshell, the cited evidence provides strong support for the view that, not only the government but also private sector - to address today's high needs - both can put a step forward for the essential needs of people. in the future, undoubtedly, the aforementioned solution will merely, substitute negative aspect by positive steps.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243523316062 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.0880829015544 0.155533422707 57% => OK
Adjectives: 0.139896373057 0.0946595960268 148% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0673575129534 0.0501214627716 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0233160621762 0.0437548338989 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113989637306 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.00259067357513 0.0403226058552 6% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.091571209 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0440414507772 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.00259067357513 0.00163938923432 158% => OK
Determiners: 0.0932642487047 0.0861772015684 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0259067357513 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00259067357513 0.011925033212 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2235.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 341.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55425219941 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.41348973607 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.348973607038 0.28420135186 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25219941349 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196480938416 0.137316102897 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.091571209 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 68.4469199487 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3125 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2610244285 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6875 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.2098607038 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.01449275362 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186548115287 0.332605444948 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0850801879524 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0546938421093 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561747215079 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123494609109 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801076221116 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491330315555 0.0742795772207 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.282802630596 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132199491395 0.0638462369009 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122910288815 0.228012699653 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346275722721 0.058150111329 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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