If i want to travel from my home to place 40 miles away, i certainly will not choose airplane or bicycle. Because 40 miles is not so much way that i would travel by airplne. Again bicycle would be very much exausting. So there is left bus, train and car.
First of all, if i choose travelling by bus, it will be very difficult for me. The reason is that, buses are always full of people. I don't like to travel on a transport that is over crowded. Moreover, buses will stop for several times when going to a place. I can't afford this. My work is very important to me. That's why i can't waste my time.
Secondly, travelling by a car is not preferable by me. It will be very tiring for me. Because i will not be able to give attention to the street for so long. Again, holding the steering wheel and accelarator for hours and hours is a big job which can not be done by me.
Last but not the least, train is the most preferable transport for me. Since, train is fast enough to reach the destination in time. Moreover, travelling in train is not tiring. Again, i can travel at any time i wish. It is also very affordable for me. It will not be time consuming nad i will be able to finish my work in time.
To sum up, all the transportation systems are beneficial to us. But as the proverb goes "Time is money". That's why when it comes to choose one transportation to reach my destination in time, i would choose train rather then car and bus.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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If i want to travel from my home to place 40...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ly will not choose airplane or bicycle. Because 40 miles is not so much way that i woul...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ecause 40 miles is not so much way that i would travel by airplne. Again bicycle ...
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...t bus, train and car. First of all, if i choose travelling by bus, it will be ve...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to travel'.
Suggestion: to travel
...ain and car. First of all, if i choose travelling by bus, it will be very difficult for m...
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Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
... people. I don apos;t like to travel on a transport that is over crowded. Moreover, buses w...
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...s very important to me. That apos;s why i can apos;t waste my time. Secondly, t...
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... It will be very tiring for me. Because i will not be able to give attention to t...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s the most preferable transport for me. Since, train is fast enough to reach the dest...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...avelling in train is not tiring. Again, i can travel at any time i wish. It is al...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...tiring. Again, i can travel at any time i wish. It is also very affordable for me...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...r me. It will not be time consuming nad i will be able to finish my work in time....
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Suggestion:
...eneficial to us. But as the proverb goes apos;Time is money apos;. That apos;s wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...tation to reach my destination in time, i would choose train rather then car and ...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to train'
Suggestion: to train
... my destination in time, i would choose train rather then car and bus.
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...on in time, i would choose train rather then car and bus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19649122807 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4162576468 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480701754386 0.524837075471 92% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 26.6675781094 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.8333333333 100.406767564 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 20.6045352989 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.45833333333 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119388126128 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414431796941 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580186845127 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811762085169 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669732305616 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 11.7677419355 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 58.1214874552 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.1575268817 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.19 10.9000537634 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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