The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that traffic problems are directly linked to the high volumes of commuters who travel to work, schools and shopping as a part of their daily routine. While I personally agree with the necessity of reducing the traveling needs, I believe that this is not the solely approach to arrest the issue.
Apparently, the ever-increasing innovation of technological advancements has made it feasible for modern societies to apply this measure. For instance, thanks to the introduction of the Internet, businesspeople are able to perform transactions with their foreign partners without an...
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It seems that I have lots to
It seems that I have lots to do to improve my sentence-sentence coherence. Thank you very much!
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You are welcome!
flaws:
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1516 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.376 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.075 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.165 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.769 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.542 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.03 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5