Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are concerns about who is the best teacher for children. Although some people may say that kids learn more while at school, others believe that knowledge is divided by school and parents. In my opinion, it is worthy to weigh before reaching some conclusion.
First of all, parents , sometimes, may have more knowledge than teachers in school. This is due to parents' high education. For example, while ones have merely finished the undergraduate programs but no more specialization have they been accomplished, others ones have finished some p.h.d programs, thus can assist much better their pupils. When we take into account the high education in a high school, there are only few exceptions for teachers with higher education studies. Therefore, we could undoubtedly tell that children will be more well informed with parents than at school.
However, when we take into account not only the low class but also public schools there are many cases where not well educated teachers may be watched. For instance, for the case when we consider the low class parents it is somehow intricate to have well-educated parents trying to convey knowledge if they could not attend college or, if they had not had a good formation. But, for the public schools' side, it lays on the situation where we cannot find highly educated teachers. Then, for those circumstances parents' knowledge would become the best choice for kids.
Moreover, only if children are luck of having tutors in an occasion where she/he may assist children deeply. For example, this happens when parents can pay for only one tutor to have their pupils well-educated and assisted. Thus, certainly the tutors will be the best teacher for kids.
Finally, after weighing the circumstances, it can be said that those lucky children who were born from highly educated parents will be surely well-educated and these parents are the best teachers for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'lies on'?
Suggestion: lies on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07619047619 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56844106822 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3153048758 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954666672317 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444992260608 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361123805671 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064579643429 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189266249106 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.2 Out of 6.0
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