Evaluate a public place. Suggest how it could be made more appealing.
The Old Quarter - a huge change for the stability
Old Quarter is a large historical area which tourists cannot skip when visiting Hanoi. It has 36 streets which have been told many folk poems and tales since thousands years ago. However, the place has become extremely chaotic and polluted area which has been brought about by the population increase and the local government’s irresponsibility. This essay will describe the Old Quarter features, and according to that, the author will also give some recommendations to the city authorities that they can apply to tackle these issues.
First and foremost, the Old Quarter is a crucial zone of Hanoi city which is located at the heart of the city where contains a collection of ancient buildings and houses. The area is also the national political and public administration center of Vietnam. That is the reason which explains why it has a great number of modern and luxurious architectures. They include the governmental offices and international hotels, such as, National Convention Center and Hilton or Melia hotel. Additionally, crowded streets, cramped roads, and small pavements are one of the stand out components which created the unique features of the Old Quarter, for instance, Hang Ma street is a distinctive picture which represents the tradition of Hanoi’s 36 streets.
Equally important, the Old Quarter has the lakeside road system which is closed for walking in the weekend, thereupon, tourists and local people who are alike have been attracted to come there for enjoying “Hanoi’s spirit”. The majority of roads and streets are small and narrow, thus, there is not enough space for pedestrians. Sadly, it is not easy to find support when you are travelling here because the lack of information providing points in this central zone of the capital. Besides this disappointment, the citizens and visitors have been suffered terribly by the dirt and pollution which are owing to the city authorities’ poor management on protecting the environment and current traffic state. Plus the immense increasing in number of cars, the situation has become increasingly severe in recent years. Clearly, this area need to be reformed and changed to improve and conserve its historical values, actually, that is not only in foreign tourists’ assessment, but also in local people’s eyes.
Accordingly, there are some solution which can help the city address the issues aforementioned. Firstly, the government should quickly improve the traffic quality by encouraging the development of the public transportation system surrounding the area, such as metro or buses. Moreover, prohibiting private motorbikes and cars should be cautiously scrutinized to limit them from entering the city center following a daily schedule. Secondly, designing and building more new “Hanoi booths” which will provide information for foreigners and domestic tourists. Furthermore, these will promote the tourism service at the capital’s heart areas. One more thing, the government has to prepare drastically for expanding Old Quarter’s pavements as the purpose of enhancing the city’s sightseeing. The procedure might not easy to operate, but it is critical to the city’s quantum lead, and by virtue of this, the government has to satisfy short term benefits before they can completely overcome these problems.
In conclusion, the Old Quarter is playing a great role in the development of Vietnam’s capital city where the changing reflection of the country has been represented. Unfortunately, the abundance of cultural, political and economic values of the nation which are subsisting in and around this area are in emergency on account of the pollution, traffic jam and lack of space. Accordingly, managing the transportation and private vehicles is necessary to increase the air and traffic quality. Furthermore, Hanoi’s city council should consider the ideas which are expanding the pavement systems and providing more support points to help maintain all these wonderful national heritages. All these solutions will be the key factor to the stability of the national capital.
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... tradition of Hanoi's 36 streets. Equally important, the Old Quarter has the lake...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3550.0 1977.66487455 180% => OK
No of words: 645.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50387596899 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03952876749 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.154718247 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 212.727598566 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524031007752 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1092.6 618.680645161 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 15.0 3.08781362007 486% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5098243323 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.481481481 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0418829215219 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139765870703 0.076458572812 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203409281945 0.0737576698707 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0222945476289 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170022553758 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 86.8835125448 227% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.2 Out of 6.0
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