Whether or not, if every generation is different in important ways is widely debated with many people claiming that their parent generation is not different from their generation.
In my opinion this notion merit serious consideration and I will explain why in this essay with pertinent argument and examples. There are myriad of argument in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that in my generation education is consider very important for both male and female. But in my parent generation education is only important for male. Because they believed that female education ends up in the kitchen which is so not true.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that, technology has made it possible for student to study from home through the means of internet. Although, in my parent time discipline of children is very important. This discipline help children to obey their parent, there by becoming responsible children the the society. However, this discipline can be detrimental to the health of the children.
For instance, underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical is that my parent generation lack technological usage and proper health care management leading to some incurable diseases.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that the my generation is differ and better than my parent generation and the benefit are too great to be overlooked. Nevertheless, the discipline that is entails in my parent generation should not be overlooked either.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not, if every generation is different in im...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...e is that in my generation education is consider very important for both male and female...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n education is only important for male. Because they believed that female education end...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rom home through the means of internet. Although, in my parent time discipline of childr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... there by becoming responsible children the the society. However, this discipline can b...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... there by becoming responsible children the the society. However, this discipline can b...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...tance, underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical is that my parent generation lack techn...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...t outlined above, one can conclude that the my generation is differ and better than my...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
... can conclude that the my generation is differ and better than my parent generation an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tion should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26359832636 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9643044827 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560669456067 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3201922117 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279795010723 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104717662287 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123507135034 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186640675842 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138259179234 0.0645574589148 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.6 Out of 6.0
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