Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Joy Peterson. I am a student in your institution, faculty of foreign language with the department of English language. My student number is k43290u. I am writing to inform you that I can no longer continue to attend lecture due to new job offer that I accepted.
My current job involve a lot of travelling and training with different department in my company. As a result attending classes is no longer possible.
I would like to cancel my classes because there is no possibility for me to attend classes anymore. Finally, I would like to be refunded of my upfront fess payment I made before starting the program.
I look forward to your favorable respond to my request.
Kind Regards
Joy Peterson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ith different department in my company. As a result attending classes is no longer...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 610.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 127.0 206.0 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8031496063 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8225243902 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7655473745 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20530807298 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755311626781 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742934064541 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117711262566 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477422729017 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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