In the above passage the author concludes that Super-Screen productions should allocate a greater share of its budget to reaching the public through advertising. The authors claims are inadequate and it needs to answer some unknown questions that are not mentioned in the passage. Hence before giving out a verdict Super-Screen productions should first analyze it a bit more and then take a decision.
Firstly, no where in the passage the genre of the movies are mentioned. The target audience depends on the type of movies. There is a possibility that this year Super Screen might have produced an animated movie which targets children below the age of 15. Clearly this will reduce the number of viewers from the past year if in the past year a movie of universal category was produced. Hence, first the author should analyze the types of movies that Super Screen productions have produced.
Secondly, the author has mentioned that there is an increase in ratings though the number of viewers have decreased. Again going by the example mentioned in the above passage, it is also possible that the animation movie produced was an amazing film and it was better than the movies produced in the previous years. So clearly this logic justifies the claims of the author. So here the concern for the production house is not advertising but the types of movies it has produced and it should produce in the future.
Thirdly, there is also a possibility that advertising might be just a small part of the problems that the production house is facing. Other factors such as selection of actors, locations,...etc might also play a big role. In India there are certain outstanding films but because of an underrated actor: it did not achieve greater heights that it should have achieved. Thus the selection of actor, its production cost and many other factors are not mentioned in the passage. To conclude this, one needs answers for some of the questions that I have asked.
Hence the author should first answer some unknown question and address the root cause of the problem that Super Screen productions is facing.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1716 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.807 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.131 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.054 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
...public through advertising. The authors claims are inadequate and it needs to answer s...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... that are not mentioned in the passage. Hence before giving out a verdict Super-Scree...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e and then take a decision. Firstly, no where in the passage the genre of the m...
^^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...s such as selection of actors, locations,...etc might also play a big role. In Ind...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...r heights that it should have achieved. Thus the selection of actor, its production ...
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Line 7, column 515, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...To conclude this, one needs answers for some of the questions that I have asked. Hence ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...of the questions that I have asked. Hence the author should first answer some unk...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er some unknown question and address the root cause of the problem that Super Scr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 356.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95224719101 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59642202558 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474719101124 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4064842956 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9444444444 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.70786347227 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210567168029 0.218282227539 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670870846993 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720077843208 0.0701772020484 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121480296932 0.128457276422 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917128018798 0.0628817314937 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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