"The best way to reverse Aura Cosmetic's recent decline in profitability is to require each new employee in Aura's sales division to enroll in the popular SureSale seminar. After all, apparel company DressRite recently incorporated SureSale's week-long seminar into its training program for all new retail sales staff, and DressRite's total retail sales have increased dramatically since then. Besides, the SureSale sales system has been widely adopted among the nation's twenty largest companies."
Identify the argument's stated and/or unstated assumptions, explain how the argument depends on them, and discuss what the implications might be if those assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author mention the roll of Suresale seminar in improving the sales in some company. However this argument has lots of flawed. Such there is no evidence on how this seminar will boost the sales, twenty company with different background use one application and become successful this doesn’t mean the next company who use this product will also productive, and the meaning of decline and increase is not mention, ergo, it is not used wisely.
Firstly, the relation between the Suresale seminar and productivity of the company does not mention. Perhaps some age group like the young become interested in Cosmetics because of the previous advertising. Furthermore, having spent huge amount of time and effort, company gain users of their product. The comparing to different company with various product is not a sensible. Since every company has pros and cons in management and other criteria for themselves. As a case in point, Apple Company is a well-known in digital market, In some season, people reluctant to buy new. Because the high quality of the previous one or the lower quality of the product compared to other product of company. These problems won’t solve with some seminar. So before using some sort of seminar, dean of company should be understand the amount of reasons why some customer dislike the new product.
Secondly, they just mention their sales is decrease. More importantly how they figure it out. There should be some statistics to show this fact. Moreover, their source may not reliable enough. Or even the people use cosmetic product just in one season annually. There are diverse factors in order to changing sales rate, such as vacation, wages and spare time. Vacation is so valuable for families who parents both have permanent job, hence, they will more and more reliable to shopping instead of craft. Not just this factor but also wage has a consequently effect on shopping. As a vivid example, the poor who suffer from source of finantional problem cannot afford buying staff. So as much as the people suffer from poverty, they spend less and less on cosmetic product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
The author mention the roll of Suresale seminar in improvi...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...in improving the sales in some company. However this argument has lots of flawed. Such ...
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Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'understood'?
Suggestion: understood
...t of seminar, dean of company should be understand the amount of reasons why some customer...
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Line 5, column 545, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('consequently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('effect') instead of another adjective.
... Not just this factor but also wage has a consequently effect on shopping. As a vivid example, the po...
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Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...ce of finantional problem cannot afford buying staff. So as much as the people suffer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 351.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04273504274 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51543881007 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7950680259 57.8364921388 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4545454545 119.503703932 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9545454545 23.324526521 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.70786347227 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112029708818 0.218282227539 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320765152219 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397372929954 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079458180984 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039944618556 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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