The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
it is a general notion that "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the
general welfare of the nation at large. " it has been used time and again as a strong reason by
those opposing the corporate system. it is a general notion that an average company makes
300% profit per sale it makes.
looking at the larger picture it is often true that corresponding government services are often
much cheaper and with similar benefits as compared to the private counterparts. a very glaring
example of this situation is in the field of pharmaceuticals where private companies have a
monopoly in certain drug manufacturing. essential drugs tend to be extremely costly and
unaffordable to the majority.
not very long ago, a wholesale chain was reported of selling asparagus soaked in water at a rate
more than 4 times the leaf or water combined. tutorial institutes tend to lure parents into believing
that their toddlers need extra attention and sell them costly packages of not very essential
tutorials.
airline companies are a fine example of the above-stated statement as well. to maximise their
profits they tend to charge hefty for luggage and set the average weight of a person higher than
the normal. they have often been found to be violating crucial safety measures and stuffing in
more seat rows than recommended.
coal mining companies often tend to ignore the safety of miners pushing them to dangerous
areas which might cause disasters and cost many lives.
in third world countries such as India, where the population is a major problem, public transports
by both the government and the corporates have been established. while the government
facilities are much cheaper they usually run in debt and are forced to occasional hikes in the
price. the private sector transportation is costly enough to begin with and unaffordable to
masses.
the idea of the corporate sectors is to maximize profit even if it is by a single rupee. it is what is
taught to a new employee the day he or she joins office, and it follows.
although, it is also true that companies to participate in general welfare activities such as flood
aids, plantations, medical facilities to employees etc., but the point focus of the company is
always revenue generation.
in such situation, it is no surprise that "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates
conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. " therefore it is the need and responsibility
of the state to take care of public interest and provide its citizens with amenities and facilities with
otherwise they would not be able to afford.
corporate sectors exists and will always continue to exist for revenue generation and
maximization of profit. because that is the basis of its foundation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, third, well, while, in general, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2406.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 465.0 441.139720559 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17419354839 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82043154231 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 204.123752495 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.889629604 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1363636364 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.70786347227 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 5.15768463074 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 5.25449101796 875% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346515015321 0.218282227539 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972216645887 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185428218426 0.0701772020484 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071629229471 0.128457276422 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11829539137 0.0628817314937 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 98.500998004 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.