The director of the International Health Foundation recently released this announcement:
"A new medical test that allows the early detection of a particular disease will prevent the deaths of people all over the world who would otherwise die from the disease. The test has been extremely effective in allowing doctors to diagnose the disease six months to a year before it would have been spotted by conventional means. As soon as we can institute this test as a routine procedure in hospitals around the world, the death rate from this disease will plummet."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The newspaper article states that the country power is determine by the strength of its border to prevent any illegal migrants in its country. The article states that these migrants must be sent back to their countries of origin. The article gives the reasoning behind such argument that they pose threat to its economy and national identity. This might look infallible argument at the first glance but on the fastidious look on the argument the flaws in the assumptions are palpable.
Firstly, the argument is too dependent on the limited outlook of illegal immigrants being the only reason why the economy and identity can be in tatters. It states that illegal immigrants are the ones endangering the economy while there can be multiple reasons for that. This arguments are flawed until the actual number of illegal migrants, that have entered the country illegally and are using up country resources, are known.
Secondly, the argument doesn't state any procedure as to how the illegal migrants be identified. The procedures can be a tedious and also a detrimental one for the foreign citizens who have visited the country with valid documentation. The efforts can cause xenophobia among the citizens of the country and bigotry and chauvinism among the citizens of the country may increase in the name patriotism. The procedures must be an assuring one that will not affect anyone who is not complicit with the crime.
Thirdly, the process of finding all illegal migrants and sending them back to their own country would be much costlier than the so called damage that is caused by them to the country. Also, it might be the case the illegal migrants came to the country in need of employment and business opportunity. Such migrants would help in betterment in the economy and also fare better in terms of creating employment opprotunities of the citizens of the country.
Finally, the strength of the border doesn't determine any autonomy of the country. It only tells the countries zeal in creating divide among humans with usage of great amount of money which could have been employed in bettering the life of the citizens globally. The prevention of borders with army troops can be cause of major economic losses if the borders are free of terrorism and insurgencies. The borders are just in the minds of the government, the people believe in unity in diversity and they try to leave harmoniously with accord .
The arguments of the authors are too vague and have greater implications on humans, It directly concludes to throw them out of the country which is not what a humanitarian country would even think to do. The arguments stands fallible under the scope of humanity and it is also to extremists in the liberal world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...rticle states that the country power is determine by the strength of its border to preven...
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Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sent back to their countries of origin. The article gives the reasoning behind such...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...there can be multiple reasons for that. This arguments are flawed until the actual n...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s, are known. Secondly, the argument doesnt state any procedure as to how the illeg...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ry may increase in the name patriotism. The procedures must be an assuring one that...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... Finally, the strength of the border doesnt determine any autonomy of the country. ...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...onomy of the country. It only tells the countries zeal in creating divide among humans wi...
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Line 9, column 310, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...vention of borders with army troops can be cause of major economic losses if the borders...
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Line 9, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ey try to leave harmoniously with accord . The arguments of the authors are too...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to leave harmoniously with accord . The arguments of the authors are too vague ...
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Line 11, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cations on humans, It directly concludes to throw them out of the country which i...
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Line 11, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...itarian country would even think to do. The arguments stands fallible under the sco...
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Line 11, column 220, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'stand'.
Suggestion: stand
...y would even think to do. The arguments stands fallible under the scope of humanity an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 55.5748502994 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2286.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 460.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96956521739 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62944843782 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 204.123752495 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476086956522 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 705.55239521 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4347036367 57.8364921388 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.3 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437419537025 0.218282227539 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0153648013573 0.0743258471296 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0157693363349 0.0701772020484 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0251992404048 0.128457276422 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0080044418664 0.0628817314937 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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