The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a journal on environmental issues Over the past year the Crust Copper Company CCC has purchased over 10 000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia Mining copper on this land will in | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a journal on environmental issues.
"Over the past year, the Crust Copper Company (CCC) has purchased over 10,000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia. Mining copper on this land will inevitably result in pollution and, since West Fredonia is the home of several endangered animal species, in environmental disaster. But such disasters can be prevented if consumers simply refuse to purchase products that are made with CCC's copper unless the company abandons its mining plans."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

In the editorial, it had been stated that, the Crust Copper Company had been mining on 10,000 squares of miles of land in tropical nation of west Fredonia which is leading to pollution and threatening of several endangered animals. In order to solve this issue, they had suggested that a simple abandonment of the consumer to the products of the CCC’s copper can provide solution. However, before this recommendation can be made, the author should be to answer following three questions.
Firstly, are all the consumers apprised of the threatening issue being produced by the mining of the Crust Copper Company? The author has prematurely assumed that the all the consumers are savvy about this threatening issue and had baselessly made conclusion that the abandoning of the products can solve the problem. May be, the majority of the consumer may be unaware about the problem being issued by mining. These customers may continue to use the products of CCC company and the problem may not be solved. If this scenario is true than the conclusion made would be significantly weakened.
Furthermore, can just refusing the use of the product by the customer of west Fredonia be sufficient enough to pressurize the company to stop the mining? Can we make the generalization based on only this refusing that the proper pressure would appear on the company? Perhaps the company might sell the copper to other business tycoon, who make the other copper product from other company name, might disregard their regular customer. If this scenario will occur than the company sell of the copper would not reduce and the pressure made by the customer would in vain. The argument made above would be totally baseless.
Finally, can refusing the product might solve the problem of loss of habitat of endangered species? Perhaps beside from the mining there might be some other issues which might have led to threatening the endangered species from their habitat. However, there might be the problem of inadequacy of the food due to climate change which might be the reason for the threatening of the animals. If this is the case just by refusing the company’s product would not give solution to the problem of endangered species.
In conclusion, as stated now, the argument made above is totally baseless because of its reliance on the baseless evidence and assumptions. So, the author should be able to give the answer to the above question or should provide more evidence, before the above suggestion can be considered.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pany and the problem may not be solved. If this scenario is true than the conclusi...
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Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...son for the threatening of the animals. If this is the case just by refusing the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2260.96107784 93% => OK
No of words: 418.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02392344498 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62395590109 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430622009569 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0340575232 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.526315789 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182366475442 0.218282227539 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636249002689 0.0743258471296 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716580826183 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109423968985 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094876769768 0.0628817314937 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments