In this memo, the business manager agues that the company should stop importing and stocking the imported cheeses, in stead, they should focus on the production of domestic cheeses due to the recent preference of domestic cheeses in the newest chain stores of the company. Morevoer, the autuhor illustrates a survey from Cheese of the World magazine which shows the favor of their suescribers is the domestic cheeses rather than the impored ones. While this suggestion of the company strategy is problematic in that there are some loopholes in it. More evidence are required so let's reeamine the arg...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 541 350
No. of Characters: 2498 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.823 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.617 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.482 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 170 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 126 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.037 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.204 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...c cheeses rather than the impored ones. While this suggestion of the company strategy...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: reflecting
...l selling performance is not convincing to reflect the companys perfomance of the country....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... in the five newest stores, rather than all of the stores.For example, as we do not know h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...t stores, rather than all of the stores.For example, as we do not know how many sto...
^^^
Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...heeses may vary with a high possiblity. Whats more, given the regional difference on...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 802, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vary with a high possiblity. Whats more, given the regional difference on this pr...
^^
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... Moreover, As we do not know where are this magazines subscribers from, we could no...
^^^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rt the selling strategy of the company. As there is a high possiblity that the sub...
^^
Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to bring more benefits to the company. While his suggestion is not compelling as the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 55.5748502994 139% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 540.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73518518519 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55465563865 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398148148148 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.70958083832 332% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0819178252 57.8364921388 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.85 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172837810433 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550134517318 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588134537632 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106240353686 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551843853244 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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