The following appeared in a memo from the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center, a small business serving a suburban town.
There is evidence that consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own vegetables. A national survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. And locally, the gardening magazine Great Gardeners has sold out at the village news stand three months in a row. Thus, we at Green Thumb Gardening Center can increase our profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds we stock for gardeners this coming spring.
In this memo, the owner of green thumb gardening center concludes that the consumers are becoming more and more interested in growing their own vegetables. In order to support this author has come up with certain evidences. However on a deeper scrutiny it is reveled that none of its evidences lend credible support to the conclusion let us scrutinize them further.
Firstly author talks about the survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in super markets, however authors ignores the fact that quality of fresh vegetables depend on the air, water surrounding the field if the quality of vegetables is not appropriate then its main reason is the buildings, traffic (air pollution), sewage which pollute the river water due to this vegetable quality decreased.
Also it is not clear that survey is done on thousands of people or only those who resides on town, because air is more polluted near town.Therefore we cannot rely on such kind of survey whose knowledge is limited in small scopes. Also not all people are capable of growing their own vegetables, because they have no such land to grow a crop.And if they grow one or two vegetable they not only depend on only this two vegetable they had to grow more crop.
Secondly authors talks about that the gardening magazine Great Gardeners has sold out at the village news stand three months in a row, however authors unnecessary assumes that those magazine are purchased by the local residence and not by the farmers or a firm who work on agriculture development.
Thirdly authors talks about they increase their profit by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seeds however authors ignores the fact that the land of gardeners supports those fields for seeds or not, and more importantly that they have sufficient part of land to grow the vegetables, it is also seen that the seeds and magazine are sold more in monsoon then other months.
Overall the memo is far from forceful enough to persuade that the consumers are interested in growing their own vegetable irrespective of the fact that the land condition, air and water condition are favorable or not. Thus author failed to give cogent evidences to prove their point.To better evaluate the argument we would need more information about alternative sources of vegetables for local consumers. We should also need to know that why all the copy of new stands of the gardening magazine has sold.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... because air is more polluted near town.Therefore we cannot rely on such kind of survey w...
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... because air is more polluted near town.Therefore we cannot rely on such kind of survey w...
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...e knowledge is limited in small scopes. Also not all people are capable of growing ...
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...e they have no such land to grow a crop.And if they grow one or two vegetable they ...
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...owever authors unnecessary assumes that those magazine are purchased by the local residence an...
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...s and magazine are sold more in monsoon then other months. Overall the memo is fa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258503401361 0.25644967241 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.154195011338 0.15541462614 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975056689342 0.0836205057962 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0770975056689 0.0520304965353 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0272364105082 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138321995465 0.125424944231 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0385487528345 0.0416121511921 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5931606677 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226757369615 0.026700313972 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00453514739229 0.001811407834 250% => OK
Determiners: 0.0907029478458 0.113004496875 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00680272108844 0.0255425247493 27% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0113378684807 0.0127820249294 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2497.0 2731.13054187 91% => OK
No of words: 416.0 446.07635468 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00240384615 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334134615385 0.378187486979 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276442307692 0.287650121315 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177884615385 0.208842608468 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132211538462 0.135150697306 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5931606677 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 207.018472906 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 55.4302899481 52.1807786196 106% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 37.8181818182 23.2022227129 163% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.549783468 57.7814097925 198% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.0 141.986410481 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8181818182 23.2022227129 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.724660767414 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.58251231527 251% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.4624125874 51.9672348444 126% => OK
Elegance: 1.56097560976 1.8405768891 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440452156179 0.441005458295 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164694099179 0.135418324435 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.089778076919 0.0829849096947 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.720366284498 0.58762219726 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184859443424 0.147661913831 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215873979278 0.193483328276 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166955669591 0.0970749176394 172% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272637359065 0.42659136922 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136471517121 0.0774707102158 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269154718162 0.312017818177 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895003671265 0.0698173142475 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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