Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.
Success plays a key role to make our life comfortable, Success of a person means, he show's, that he achieved these things in his life.Success doesn't depend upon how much risk you take in your life,but it is partially depend upon your decisions, how promptly you take your decision's. AS i am partially agree with authors assertion on this issue.
Firstly if a person cannot take risks in his life will become dull and lazy, he didn't have confidence on himself, he only thought about the success without any proper strategy he discourage himself and others to not to take risks, this types of persons can not succeed in their life's.They only depend upon the god's grace and government policies.
Eg: A famous political leader of a political party in India, Mr Rahul Gandhi, he become the vice president of congress party by his mother's and family grace.
We also seen many Hollywood and Bollywood superstar kids who try to become an good actor, but cannot got the success as they come by taking less amount of risks.
Risk creates an responsibility in ones life, which help then to get succeed, a man without responsibility will become apathetic, lonely.
Secondly if a person is too risky in his life, then this type of persons are dangerous, they didn't sit silently or calmly in their life.And due to their behavior other relative can suffer. Too much risks is dangerous in life.
Eg: As great investor Mr Warren Buffet once said that don't put all eggs in one basket for the matter of share market, we have to restrict our self for taking too much risks.
Thirdly the combination of risk and cautious planning will lead us to make our life more comfortable and worthy. This type of persons are smart persons and their decision are called smart decision.One who learned to create a balance between risk and comfort will surely get the success in his life.
To sum up i said that before taking the risk a person can look after all the essential behaviors of that risk, but do not hesitate from the consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Success
...at he achieved these things in his life.Success doesn't depend upon how much risk ...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...upon how much risk you take in your life,but it is partially depend upon your decisi...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...u take in your life,but it is partially depend upon your decisions, how promptly you t...
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Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...promptly you take your decision's. AS i am partially agree with authors asser...
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Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mptly you take your decision's. AS i am partially agree with authors asserti...
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Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...your decision's. AS i am partially agree with authors assertion on this issue. ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'discourages'.
Suggestion: discourages
... success without any proper strategy he discourage himself and others to not to take risks...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ns can not succeed in their life's.They only depend upon the god's grace a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Hollywood seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
...'s and family grace. We also seen many Hollywood and Bollywood superstar kids who try to...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lywood superstar kids who try to become an good actor, but cannot got the success ...
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Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...g less amount of risks. Risk creates an responsibility in ones life, which help...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s. Risk creates an responsibility in ones life, which help then to get succeed, a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...;t sit silently or calmly in their life.And due to their behavior other relative ca...
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Line 11, column 200, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...behavior other relative can suffer. Too much risks is dangerous in life. Eg: As g...
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Line 13, column 169, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ave to restrict our self for taking too much risks. Thirdly the combination of ri...
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Line 15, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is type of persons are smart persons and their decision are called smart decision...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...heir decision are called smart decision.One who learned to create a balance between...
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Line 17, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t the success in his life. To sum up i said that before taking the risk a pers...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'after all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252358490566 0.238963963785 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.143867924528 0.154291517835 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731132075472 0.0886310499679 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542452830189 0.0506014161523 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0731132075472 0.0449626384858 163% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108490566038 0.123526278965 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0117924528302 0.0379742944744 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75021871111 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235849056604 0.0316879551592 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00235849056604 0.0014075125626 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.0683962264151 0.0950106342287 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212264150943 0.0245489744465 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117924528302 0.0157978311181 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2080.0 2899.98275862 72% => OK
No of words: 354.0 478.390804598 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87570621469 6.0591788892 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.65681771538 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341807909605 0.369966551584 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228813559322 0.285172536893 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152542372881 0.207245337619 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101694915254 0.136322040163 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75021871111 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 234.298850575 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564971751412 0.492565540709 115% => OK
Word variations: 63.2217876999 56.8184620615 111% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 21.1264367816 52% => OK
Sentence length: 32.1818181818 23.7468607788 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.3125911623 62.0618507366 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.090909091 143.81877709 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1818181818 23.7468607788 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.728815259664 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.87931034483 184% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.71264367816 233% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.063174114 52.2641144681 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.37391304348 1.64547068916 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252086492408 0.39480681544 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151292060485 0.11556216369 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0867029858147 0.0736162880345 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.904826593794 0.531340600358 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155880381598 0.15197228837 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112681699239 0.158818324754 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405726829063 0.0851127212816 48% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.141790384158 0.388921930462 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.064919293352 0.0677916285025 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111163105129 0.28015025965 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436158463373 0.0610219844235 71% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.8591954023 74% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30459770115 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.96264367816 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.10632183908 99% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.04597701149 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 15.0862068966 66% => OK
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.25 Out of 6