Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
Though the above statement is true in some instances that success comes from taking risk but the above statement is invalid in most of the cases.
For achieving success in life one must apply persistence effort and have high determination along with necessary tool which is planning. Most of successful people
had to pass through hurdles in order to achieve their potential and become what they are. Also amount of hard work is not the only factor determining success sometimes
taking risk and going beyond the routine helps scaling new heights. As a result success can be achieved by a person who is ia risk taker as well as a determined and
relentless worker.
There is a list of people who were on the verge of bankruptcy and gave almost everything to achieve success. Elon Musk is a apotheosis of the list
he invested all his money in his rocket program (SpaceX) and was successful in his last attempt to send the rocket to mars which was the first of a kind
rocket with component reusability. Had he not taken the risk and ended his venture after few unsuccessful attempt we wouldn't seen the major step of
human race and till he continues to take risk by investing in various other project which seems unachiveable at first.
Although taking risk not necessarily means achieving success there is an equal chance of failure. Planning is paramount to taking risks which means that possibility of
failure can be reduced to a great extend by exhaustive planning consider the example of mutual fund investor and how they can nearly always get high amount of returns
on investments they do so by excessive study and analysis of the market and other external features as well which could swerve or fluctuate the market prices
thus a high amount of planning in a cautious manner is required for achieving success.
Risk taking is the very next step after planning without which planning is futile. Risk taker may have always not achieved what they desired but they have
definately achievied more than those who have never tried. Successful risk takers are some renowned names such as business tycoon Warren Buffet, Bill Gates,
Jeff Besous and many more. Though they did there research work before it does not mean that they the predicted the corrected outcomes.
Taking your chances is quiet important in sports as sports do not follow any predicted and linear graph they are of mercurial nature and
cannot be preplanned they requires to take spontaneous decisions and thus there is always risk involved which is important for success. Teams makes
unpredicted changes in strategies at the dying moments based on the opponents plans and those changes cannot be anticipated beforehand.
There is a always a procedure to reduce the risk to very low levels which can be done only by working on minute details. This involves major problems
that can occur and hence forestall them by advanced planning. Companies do implement this strategy where they note down potential risk and try to minimize those
risk by nullifying them. Such research work,Survey are carried out which helps in planning and reducing risk to a very minor amount.
Thus one can state that without taking risks one cannot achieve success and hence taking chances is important for getting success.It also means that
exhaustive and careful planning can help in reducing the amount of risk required for achieving in success hence risk taking and cautious planning go hand in hand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eir potential and become what they are. Also amount of hard work is not the only fac...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nly factor determining success sometimes taking risk and going beyond the routine...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to scale' or 'scale'.
Suggestion: to scale; scale
...risk and going beyond the routine helps scaling new heights. As a result success can be...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a risk taker as well as a determined and relentless worker. There is a list of...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ything to achieve success. Elon Musk is a apotheosis of the list he invested all...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...nture after few unsuccessful attempt we wouldnt seen the major step of human race and ...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t which seems unachiveable at first. Although taking risk not necessarily means achie...
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Line 15, column 32, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a cautious manner" with adverb for "cautious"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... prices thus a high amount of planning in a cautious manner is required for achieving success. R...
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Line 19, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Bill Gates, Jeff Besous and many more. Though they did there research work before it ...
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Line 21, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r graph they are of mercurial nature and cannot be preplanned they requires to ta...
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Line 22, column 27, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
... nature and cannot be preplanned they requires to take spontaneous decisions and thus ...
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Line 22, column 36, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
...nd cannot be preplanned they requires to take spontaneous decisions and thus there is...
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Line 25, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...be anticipated beforehand. There is a always a procedure to reduce the risk t...
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Line 27, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Survey
...k by nullifying them. Such research work,Survey are carried out which helps in planning...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...educing risk to a very minor amount. Thus one can state that without taking risks...
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Line 29, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...hances is important for getting success.It also means that exhaustive and carefu...
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Line 29, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for getting success.It also means that exhaustive and careful planning can help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2908.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 582.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99656357388 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91168771031 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48963321006 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 883.8 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.4931333649 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.476190476 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.97078651685 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242726878573 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719279904914 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054688333477 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719044698224 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554659090669 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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