The vice president of a company who constructs the shopping malls released a notes, which concludes that they want Appian Roadways to build access roads for their malls. Though the evidences provided by the vice president are enough to accept the conclusion. But there are few questions which needs to be answered, if not, may undermine the conclusion.
Firstly, question is the comparison between a section of route 101, constructed by Good Intentions Roadways and a section of route 40, by Appian Roadways. Even though the section of route 101 is only 2 years old and has been damaged severely with potholes, may be it is because of the road is used by heavy vehicles which are used for construction. Area surrounding route 101 is developing area so a lot of construction works are going. Route 40 can be located in a residential are where only light vehicles such as mopeds, scooters or cars are moving on roads. The vice president should look at this question which without evidence provided about the usage of roads.
Secondly, climatic conditions also effect the condition of roads. If there are heavy rains and floods in a particular area, roads get damaged quickly even if they are constructed with high quality. Without considering the climatic conditions of both route 101 and 40, it leaves a heavy doubt to believe that appian roadways are better compared to Good Intentions Roadways. Good Intentions Roadways may also construct with high quality or even better quality than Appian Roadways.
Thirdly, without providing information about good intentions roadways purchases of machinery we cannot evaluate the argument of Appian roadways commitment in positive manner. Good Intention Roadways can be of less promulgating side, there by, no press release about their machinery purchases. In spite of state-of-the-art machinery some companies cannot produce quality work. This question seriously undermines the vice president's conclusion.
Lastly, appointment of new quality-control manager puts up a lot of questions. What happened to the previous manager? Roads laid by appian roadways 4 years back are in good condition which happened under the previous quality-control manager. New manager may not have good experience on road construction because his previous work experience may be of constructing buildings.
To sum up, there are many questions which are to be addressed by the vice president. Without answers to the question mentioned above, we cannot evaluate the predicted result as at least 4 years the roads will not get any repairs.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 2101 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.124 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.821 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 98 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.636 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.277 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.682 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.571 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a note' or simply 'notes'?
Suggestion: a note; notes
... constructs the shopping malls released a notes, which concludes that they want Appian ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to build access roads for their malls. Though the evidences provided by the vice pres...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...as been damaged severely with potholes, may be it is because of the road is used by he...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, at least, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29095354523 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90305209316 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493887530562 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.138731527 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.70786347227 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168469897682 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526025659476 0.0743258471296 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510742670815 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884207699576 0.128457276422 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467703676627 0.0628817314937 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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