In the memo from the owner of a chain of movie-rental store;he has introduced a problem regarding decrease in profit and suggested two remedies to overcome the problem. One of them is closing the store earlier than the regular time just as they have done in their store located in downtown Marston; which was proven profitable. And as the second remedy he has thought to reduce the store inventory by no longer storing the DVDs more than five years old. But in doing so he has forgotten to look into few possibilities. So,it would be perfunctory to implement new policies to overcome the problem without proper analysis of those possibilities.
First he has asked to reduce the operating expenses at the DVD store but he has not given possible way to achieve that. And said that they are famous for low prices so increase in price would be useless. Further he has explained that reducing the working our the store located at the downtown Marston is proven profitable;so they should replicate the same policy here. He has indirectly assumed that the people here have the same time arrangement as the people in downtown. May be in downtown crowd there is comparatively low and it is not useful to open the store after 6 p.m. or may be the pick up hours for the other stores are after evening or at night. If that is true than it would be proven an exact opposite policy for the other stores.
After that he has suggested on more solution that they must reduce the storing of more than 5 years old DVDs. By doing so he has assumed that the DVDs older than 5 years are demanded very less. May be people buying DVDs are looking for older DVDs more than the newly came movie-DVDs. And he has stated that this implemented new policies have received very few complaints but if such policies are suitable for the people in downtown it does not mean that people visiting other stores are happily convinced with this. May be they will not be comfortable with the time changing and the stock reducing policy.
Summing up every possibilities to the solutions change, it is clear that the owner need to do some more research on the climate of every store. Owner should look for the best time that can be profitable for the store and after that he can apply that operating hours reducing policy. Owner should have some statastical data about which DVDs are in demand and then decide about that stock reducing idea. And before applying the same alteration in every stores he should look for the possible circumstances at every store.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...otten to look into few possibilities. So,it would be perfunctory to implement new p...
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...angement as the people in downtown. May be in downtown crowd there is comparativel...
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... crowd there is comparatively low and it is not useful to open the store after 6 ...
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...posite policy for the other stores. After that he has suggested on more solution ...
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...stores are happily convinced with this. May be they will not be comfortable with the t...
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...ucing idea. And before applying the same alteration in every stores he should loo...
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... possible circumstances at every store.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'as for']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197894736842 0.25644967241 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.193684210526 0.15541462614 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0989473684211 0.0836205057962 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0520304965353 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0526315789474 0.0272364105082 193% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.143157894737 0.125424944231 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0694736842105 0.0416121511921 167% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.451593328 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210526315789 0.026700313972 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00421052631579 0.001811407834 232% => OK
Determiners: 0.107368421053 0.113004496875 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252631578947 0.0255425247493 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00631578947368 0.0127820249294 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2532.0 2731.13054187 93% => OK
No of words: 447.0 446.07635468 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6644295302 6.12365571057 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284116331096 0.378187486979 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203579418345 0.287650121315 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145413870246 0.208842608468 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0715883668904 0.135150697306 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.451593328 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 207.018472906 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456375838926 0.469332199767 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.4647957566 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.35 23.2022227129 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8839253334 57.7814097925 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6 141.986410481 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.35 23.2022227129 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.58251231527 195% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.7079418345 51.9672348444 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.37323943662 1.8405768891 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22331961049 0.441005458295 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138682452121 0.135418324435 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749547708338 0.0829849096947 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532750024593 0.58762219726 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107019045323 0.147661913831 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940906852269 0.193483328276 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563528498885 0.0970749176394 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.440426868109 0.42659136922 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0639309379192 0.0774707102158 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164710954889 0.312017818177 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389041787959 0.0698173142475 56% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.87684729064 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 14.657635468 116% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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