The following appeared as a part of an advertisement for Adams, who is seeking reelection as governor:
“Reelect Adams, and you will be voting for proven leadership in improving the state’s economy. Over the past year alone, 70 percent of the state’s workers have had increases in their wages, 5,000 new jobs have been created, and six corporations have located their headquarters here. Most of the respondents in a recent poll said they believed that the economy is likely to continue to improve if Adams is reelected. Adams’s opponent, Zebulon, would lead our state in the wrong direction, because Zebulon disagrees with many of Adams’s economic policies.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
The advertisment for Adams reelection campaign says that the people should reelect Adam because under his leadership 70% of state workes have had increased wage, 5000 new jobs were created and six cooperation located their headquater there. It also says that Zebulon would lead the state in the wrong direction because he disagrees with adam on the economic policies. The argument is not will reasoned and has many flaws as we will discuss.
Firstly, the advertisment talk only about the positive things about Adam, hence giving only a partial one sided view. To evaluate wheather Adam was a good leader we must have a look at the complete picture. We should not only evaluate what he did well but also evaluate his shorcomings and then weigh the positives and negative to evaluate him as a cantidate. For example it is possible that although the states economy did well under his leadership but social programmes, infrastucture were very lacking. Also it might been possible the under his leadership goverment offices was plagued by many corrution cases. If these are true then it would make him undisirable candidate for the governor of the state.
Secondly, It is mentioned that seventy percent of state worker have had increased wage but it doesn't mention how much the increase was. It is possible that there only a minor increase in the wage of the workers not enough to keep up with the inflation, hence leaving most of the workers worse of than before with quality of living declining for most of the workers.
Thirdly, It mentions creation of 5000 new jobs and six copeartion headqueaters in favor of Adam. However to evaluate this we need to know if the unemployment rate has gone up or down. For example it is possible that in the state there were 100,000 new people entring the workforce that year but only 5000 new jobs were created which was not sufficient and hence the unemployment rate actualy increased.
Forthly, It claims that because Zebulon is doesn't agree with Adam on ecnomic policies it means that he is leading the state in the wrong direction. It is wrong beacuse it would imply that Adam's economic policy is the best that any other policy would be wrong for the economy. It is very well possible that during Adams Leadership the economy was in a booming phase and Adam didn't have good policies, which if he had would have resulted in the state benifiting much more from the Boom.
Finally to evaluate the information presented in the advertisment we would have to know the changes under Adams leadership in unemployment rate, change in quality of living of workers and the change in economic mertics of comparable states. With these information we can better evalute the argument presented in the Advertisment.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 470 350
No. of Characters: 2237 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.656 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.76 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.524 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.737 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.295 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.585 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'reason' or 'be reasoned'?
Suggestion: reason; be reasoned
...omic policies. The argument is not will reasoned and has many flaws as we will discuss. ...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
...xample it is possible that although the states economy did well under his leadership b...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ammes, infrastucture were very lacking. Also it might been possible the under his le...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have been' or 'be'?
Suggestion: have been; be
...ucture were very lacking. Also it might been possible the under his leadership gover...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e worker have had increased wage but it doesnt mention how much the increase was. It i...
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Line 13, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...peartion headqueaters in favor of Adam. However to evaluate this we need to know if the...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... unemployment rate actualy increased. Forthly, It claims that because Zebulon ...
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Line 17, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...thly, It claims that because Zebulon is doesnt agree with Adam on ecnomic policies it ...
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Line 17, column 369, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p the economy was in a booming phase and Adam didnt have good policies, which if ...
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Line 17, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...conomy was in a booming phase and Adam didnt have good policies, which if he had wou...
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Line 17, column 408, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...d Adam didnt have good policies, which if he had would have resulted in the state...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...enifiting much more from the Boom. Finally to evaluate the information presented i...
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Line 21, column 247, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...omic mertics of comparable states. With these information we can better evalute the argument pres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 28.8173652695 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 467.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9164882227 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56679719408 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 204.123752495 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460385438972 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2152674699 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.842105263 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5789473684 23.324526521 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.70786347227 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130343886347 0.218282227539 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437348951356 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043448508016 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0705363815756 0.128457276422 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426461877983 0.0628817314937 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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