The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
Television stations will mostly get revenues and money through the number of people watching that station and their specific location since advetisers are not always an international companies but a local businesses or at most a national one.
From the previeous fact to earn more money more views is recuired and to get more views you must provied news or materials that are the most concern the people on the area you targeting, like local news, the local sport teams news and scores and weather forecast for that area will concern the people most.
If a station provided this type of specific material it will for sure attract most of the local businesses advertise which is the goal of most television stations, finding what will attract people and will keep them watching the station for a longer time is the goal for any businesse that relay on advertising revenues as the main source of money.
The task of finding this type of material is hard and need alot of work and time but for a subject as news international news must have the least amount of time of the station since it is important to the nation to know what is happening around them it's not what people interest in the most, sports news and what may effect their daily basis like weather and local actions is the most news people intrest at.
Although if we look at the scale of people interest in national news and in local news the national scale is much bigger and it seem that it will provide more views than the local scale, but with the number of stations providing that type of news the odds of attracting alot of them is slim and the national scale businesses is already poupler and will only get their servicese of other advertising ways or through the biggest station in the natioal scale, so devoting the station to local news is a better option since local businesses is more and have no better way for advertising than the local station.
From all of the previeous evidences it's expected that the giving argument is true and devoting more time to weather and local news will returen the revenues to its former level and increase the pouplarity of the station between the locals.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Television stations will mostly get revenues and money through the number of people watching that station and their specific location since advetisers are not always an international companies but a local businesses or at most a national one.
Error: advetisers Suggestion: advertisers
Sentence: From the previeous fact to earn more money more views is recuired and to get more views you must provied news or materials that are the most concern the people on the area you targeting, like local news, the local sport teams news and scores and weather forecast for that area will concern the people most.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: previeous Suggestion: previous
Error: provied Suggestion: proved
Error: recuired Suggestion: required
Sentence: If a station provided this type of specific material it will for sure attract most of the local businesses advertise which is the goal of most television stations, finding what will attract people and will keep them watching the station for a longer time is the goal for any businesse that relay on advertising revenues as the main source of money.
Error: businesse Suggestion: business
Sentence: The task of finding this type of material is hard and need alot of work and time but for a subject as news international news must have the least amount of time of the station since it is important to the nation to know what is happening around them it's not what people interest in the most, sports news and what may effect their daily basis like weather and local actions is the most news people intrest at.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: intrest Suggestion: interest
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Although if we look at the scale of people interest in national news and in local news the national scale is much bigger and it seem that it will provide more views than the local scale, but with the number of stations providing that type of news the odds of attracting alot of them is slim and the national scale businesses is already poupler and will only get their servicese of other advertising ways or through the biggest station in the natioal scale, so devoting the station to local news is a
Error: natioal Suggestion: national
Error: alot Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: servicese Suggestion: services
Error: poupler Suggestion: coupler
Sentence: From all of the previeous evidences it's expected that the giving argument is true and devoting more time to weather and local news will returen the revenues to its former level and increase the pouplarity of the station between the locals.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: pouplarity Suggestion: popularity
Error: previeous Suggestion: previous
Error: returen Suggestion: return
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1762 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.589 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 54.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.265 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.517 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.925 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.301 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 206, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'business'?
Suggestion: business
... an international companies but a local businesses or at most a national one. From the p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n to know what is happening around them its not what people interest in the most, s...
^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...t in the most, sports news and what may effect their daily basis like weather and loca...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...he national scale is much bigger and it seem that it will provide more views than th...
^^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ertising than the local station. From all of the previeous evidences its expected that t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 11.1786427146 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 384.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66145833333 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32006551482 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411458333333 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 22.8473053892 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.778464859 57.8364921388 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.333333333 119.503703932 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 23.324526521 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131077697649 0.218282227539 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083676157222 0.0743258471296 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491167222073 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083676157222 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491167222073 0.0628817314937 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.5 14.3799401198 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.44 48.3550499002 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.197005988 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.1389221557 248% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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