The passage proposes that over the past year,late night news programme has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.In order to support this conclusion author has come up wit certain evidences.However a deeper scrutiny reveals that none of th evidences land credible support to the conclusion.Let us scrutinize them.
Firstly,the author talks about the complaints received from viewers were concerned with station's coverage of weather and local news.This could have been possible mainly because of the uncertainity and erroneus foreast of the weather.Also there couldn't have been much day to day activity in the news which should attract the viewers attention.
Secondly, the author talks about the advertising contracts being cancelled by the local businesses during the late night programme.This could have been majorly because of the reason that at late night prices could have been very high,also at late night people could have not shown much interest in the advertisements as everybody is so tired that they dont appreciate advertisements much at the night.
Examining all the various angles and factors involved with late night news programme, the argument does not justify the need to restore time devoted to weather and local news to former level solely not to lose and business advertisements contracts.
The business manager of a…
The business manager of a television station is planning to increase the time allotted for local news and weather forecast. He argues that, devoting more time to local news and weather would put a stop on loosing advertising revenues and as well increase the viewership for programs. To evealuate such bold argument, few of the author's assumptions shuould be supported with below requested evidences.
Firstly, author talks about viewers complaint about local news and weather coverage. however he doesn't talk about the details of the viewers complaint if they were related to time length of the programs in specific. If complaints were about not giving a detatiled report on local news and weather , perhaps it would lead to better viewer satisfaction. However these compliants could also be on the quality of content it self. For instance, this TV channel might have published wrong temperature details that users might be complaining about. Or someday local news reported turns out to be a false news. SO to understand better if increaasing local news and weather time length would lead to increased user satisfaction author has to provide more specific details from viewer complaints.
Futher, manager implies that, reduced time length for locals and weather has lead to cancelation of local business contracts. However, he doesn't provide any evidence if this is indeed true. advrtisemnt contract cancelaltion could have been happened because of various reasons. For instance, may be economy of the region is not doing so well as it was doing in previous year and that would have lead to decreased business and in turn less budget on advertisement. May be advertising firms have realised that, they have spent way too much for publicity during last year and might have corrected it this year. In that case managers argument turns out to be irrelevant to increase sustain advertising revenue. Author has to provide the details of reason of contract cancellation to better evaluate if local news and weather duration has indeed affected it.
In conclusion, the manager has made a few bold assumption while arguing that increased time length for local news and weather will increase viewership and sustain advertisemtn revenue. He has to provide above mentioned evidence to further evaluate if his plan will indeed work out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 55.5748502994 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 441.139720559 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42452830189 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86924311793 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 705.55239521 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.8473053892 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2013360346 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 287.5 119.503703932 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 23.324526521 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.75 5.70786347227 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351270032752 0.218282227539 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214770439725 0.0743258471296 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100573253884 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214770439725 0.128457276422 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100573253884 0.0628817314937 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 14.3799401198 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 48.3550499002 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.197005988 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.32208582834 128% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.1389221557 208% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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