In the recommendation from a personnel director to the president of Acme Plublishing company, he states that that the employees of Acme would benefit by enrolling for the Easy Read Course. He suggests that opting for the course would increase the productivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumptions hold water and can only be true if the following three questions are answered.
Firstly, Does the graduate from the course who read 500 page report in two hours lack speedy reading? In other words, did that graduate had not develpoed few skiils of reading in early life before opting in for the course? It can be possible that the graduate who read 500 page report in two hpours already skilled enough to read such. Perhaps, there is a possibility that the graduate already has read the report beforehand and was just reading it again. It is also possible that whatever he read, he did not understand the report. However, if any of these prove to be true than the argument cannot be counted viable.
Secondly, What is the evidence that other graduate who became vice president within a year from assistant manager got levelled up due to opting for this course? It is possible that his work would be more valued rather than his reading. Perhaps, his work and his reputation with the boss would be a possibility for his promotion. Also, it might be the possibility that the graduate work's has nothing to do with reading and it might be just his desk job where he had to test softwares or design buildings. However, if any of the stated assumptions are true, then the recommendation is weakened.
Additionally, what are the companies that are stating that easy speed reading- reading course increased their productivity? It is possible that the company has nothing to do with reading in their job profile. Also, there is no evidence which states that that the faster reading can make the day at work more productive. It is possible that the company's employees are highly paid and are already more productive compared to others. If any of these assumptions holds place then the prompt is weakened.
In conclusion, the assumptions made by the director in above arguments as it states is flawed. The assumption made by the director personnel to the president of Acme company should answer to these questions and provide evidence to evaluate the vitality of the argument.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... of Acme Plublishing company, he states that that the employees of Acme would benefit by ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would increase the productivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employee...
^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... employees of the Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. H...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'seminar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'seminars'.
Suggestion: seminars
... Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumpt...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumptions hold water and can on...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...Also, there is no evidence which states that that the faster reading can make the day at ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 432, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ady more productive compared to others. If any of these assumptions holds place th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89099526066 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67819481683 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443127962085 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7653574354 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854182589442 0.218282227539 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310157036255 0.0743258471296 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228144459896 0.0701772020484 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525743722652 0.128457276422 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00991953863668 0.0628817314937 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... of Acme Plublishing company, he states that that the employees of Acme would benefit by ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would increase the productivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employee...
^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ivity which is exclusively abailableto the the employees of the Acme company for only ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... employees of the Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. H...
^^^^
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'seminar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'seminars'.
Suggestion: seminars
... Acme company for only 500$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumpt...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...$ with 3 week seminar and a newsletter. However these assumptions hold water and can on...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...Also, there is no evidence which states that that the faster reading can make the day at ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 432, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ady more productive compared to others. If any of these assumptions holds place th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89099526066 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67819481683 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443127962085 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7653574354 57.8364921388 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854182589442 0.218282227539 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310157036255 0.0743258471296 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228144459896 0.0701772020484 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525743722652 0.128457276422 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00991953863668 0.0628817314937 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.