The following is taken from a memo from the
advertising director of the Super Screen Movie
Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing
department, during the past year, fewer people attended
Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year.
And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie
reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually
increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of
these reviews are not reaching enough of our
prospective viewers. Thus, the prpblem lies not with the
quality of our movies but with the public's lack of
awareness that movies of good quality are available.
Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share
of its budget next year to reaching the public through
advertising
Write a response in which you discuss what questions
would need to be answered in order to decide whether
the recommendation and the argument on which it is
based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the
answers to these questions would help to evaluate the
recommendation.
Two heads are better than one. This is a common phrase that implies that co-operation can prove useful in our everyday lives. Is co-operation the best way or an important way? I mostly agree, that while competition and co-operation are two great qualities, co-operation is crucial and might be the best way to train youths, two reasons would be elaborated on in the course of this essay.
To begin with, to be an effective government leader, co-operation is needed and significantly corrolated to a high chance of success as a leader. Imagine having a government leader who does not work with his given assistant for his assigned role but solely makes decisions based on his discernment alone. We can already tell that that this government leader is more prone to make arbitrary decisions because he does not seek the advice of others which is crucial for a leader. An effective leaader listens and co-operates with his people or the administrative staff set in place to offer guidance. If a leader of the future has been trained to see everyone as a competition, then the society has been set up for an egregarious future which might lead to great distress for everyone.
Another good reason to instill co-operation in young ones is related to the need for co-operation not just as a great quality but a means for survival in this contemporary world. Most adult paying Jobs requires a level of co-operation with collegues in other to maintain peace. Imagine a scenario, a young man has been brought up to always see his peers as a competition, thus they do not work together, but individually to achieve their goals, that might work well in certain fields, but a famous quote says, " f you want to go alone go slow, if you want to go far go together", so to adequately reach your maximum potential it is of utmost importance to have a sense of co-operation, not just as a good quality but as a survival skill in our modern world today.
Admittedly, there are cases where a balance of these two great qualities co-operation and competition is needed. In my earlier example of a great leader, it is indeed true that a great leader has to obtain a level of competition in order to succeed. How will a leader obtain the competitive seat if he has not competed with various candidates to be voted or elected as a leader? But, in order to keep that role or remain in leadership, a balance of these two qualities is needed.
In conclusion, co-operation and competition are two important qualities in life, there are certain points where co-operation is needed and is highly important for life survival and vice-versa. Co-operation might not be the best way to prepare young ones, but a highly important quality that life could depend on.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d might be the best way to train youths, two reasons would be elaborated on in th...
^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... discernment alone. We can already tell that that this government leader is more prone to...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 477.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77358490566 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90223841869 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482180293501 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.4534499697 57.8364921388 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0090441113438 0.218282227539 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00485181083898 0.0743258471296 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101982978421 0.0701772020484 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00560277312461 0.128457276422 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00591840546544 0.0628817314937 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d might be the best way to train youths, two reasons would be elaborated on in th...
^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... discernment alone. We can already tell that that this government leader is more prone to...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2260.96107784 101% => OK
No of words: 477.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77358490566 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90223841869 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482180293501 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.4534499697 57.8364921388 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 23.324526521 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0090441113438 0.218282227539 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00485181083898 0.0743258471296 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0101982978421 0.0701772020484 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00560277312461 0.128457276422 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00591840546544 0.0628817314937 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.