Humans arrived in the Kaliko Islands about 7,000 years ago, and within 3,000 years most of the large mammal species that had lived in the forests of the Kaliko Islands were extinct. Previous archaeological findings have suggested that early humans generally relied on both fishing and hunting for food; since archaeologists have discovered numerous sites in the Kaliko Islands where the bones of fish were discarded, it is likely that the humans also hunted the mammals. Furthermore, researchers have uncovered simple tools, such as stone knives, that could be used for hunting. The only clear explanation is that humans caused the extinction of the various mammal species through excessive hunting.
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
The author cites that humans arrived 7000 years in Kaiko islands and 3000 years ago most of the mammal species had been defunct due to the humans. It also states that humans relied on fish and mammals for satisfying their hunger whereas evidence like stones, knives and remains of fish and mammals bolsters the causes of extinction led by humans. The assertion to this author's statement should be scrutinized and reached the validity and soundness of the given citations.
Primarily, the author states ; humans relied on fish and mammals for food leading to remnant of fishes and mammals. This statement provides less justification and the evidence supporting the fact is also skewed and false. The author has brushed off other factors which may have lead to such situations. For example, natural disasters like floods or landslides, may have trolled mammals and fishes leaving them dead to decay. Also there may be large carnivorous animals or birds, whose survival may be dependent on these fishes and mammals.
Secondary, the stones and knives were discovered, in which the author inculcates that the knives were used for hunting. In this the author ignores several elements and solely focuses only on the case of coursing. These tools may be used for several purposes. To exemplify, usage of tools in construction of dwellings and constructions. Also these may be assisting in digging and agriculture or even creating and destroying fires. Creating utensils and defending from trespassers or invaders may been other contributions of such tools.
Hence, finally concluding the facet provided by the author that excessive hunting by humans ramified in extinction of numerous mammal species is invalid and imprecise and the evidence provided to fortify are unsound and erroneous.
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...evidence provided to fortify are unsound and erroneous.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270967741935 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.174193548387 0.15541462614 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0838709677419 0.0836205057962 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0520304965353 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00967741935484 0.0272364105082 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112903225806 0.125424944231 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0870967741935 0.0416121511921 209% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66061631259 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225806451613 0.026700313972 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00322580645161 0.001811407834 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0806451612903 0.113004496875 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258064516129 0.0255425247493 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129032258065 0.0127820249294 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1796.0 2731.13054187 66% => OK
No of words: 286.0 446.07635468 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27972027972 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.437062937063 0.378187486979 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314685314685 0.287650121315 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195804195804 0.208842608468 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125874125874 0.135150697306 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66061631259 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 207.018472906 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.469332199767 115% => OK
Word variations: 55.0028191325 52.1807786196 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.039408867 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0666666667 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8267267966 57.7814097925 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 141.986410481 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 23.2022227129 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.724660767414 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.58251231527 419% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.5351981352 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.17910447761 1.8405768891 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400565562367 0.441005458295 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10574856121 0.135418324435 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0514702576518 0.0829849096947 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547116869834 0.58762219726 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158710923997 0.147661913831 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164892095492 0.193483328276 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135320919258 0.0970749176394 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380457591095 0.42659136922 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0500741891165 0.0774707102158 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293378981019 0.312017818177 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109761070507 0.0698173142475 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.82512315271 145% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.82389162562 212% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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