From this passage its clear that the author is member of a group which trying to make a movie.he think they need to increase funding 10% to ensure quality product.At one time he talking about quality but on the other hand they recruit inexperienced director and crew member for making this movie.this is likely contradictory.
The first thing that they recruit a director to making the this film have not much experienced in filming.but one of the main condition for making a good quality film is having a good experienced director.Any one say that its not important that for making a quality movie the director should be experienced and he can make a quality movie if he has very good filming knowledge.in this point i agree that without being experienced but having good filming knowledge anyone may make a quality movie.but from the passage its not clear that whether the director have a good filming knowledge or not.but author intention is clear from his suggestion that they recruit inexperienced director and crew member to save many which will given to the actor and unionized crew for their over time work.but this way a good quality movie cant be make.
but on the other hand if author suggest that they spent extra money to be paid for experienced director and skillful crew member and actor then its possible make a quality product.because with inexperienced director and crew member its highly likely that they will make so much error during the movie making.on the other hand if they experienced they will make the movie smoothly and having less error.
so the position of the author is very weak about the fund rising issue and he should think other wise for ensuring quality
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...a group which trying to make a movie.he think they need to increase funding 10% to en...
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Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...e funding 10% to ensure quality product.At one time he talking about quality but o...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
... that they recruit a director to making the this film have not much experienced in filmi...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Any
...m is having a good experienced director.Any one say that its not important that for...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ry good filming knowledge.in this point i agree that without being experienced bu...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ienced but having good filming knowledge anyone may make a quality movie.but fro...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aving good filming knowledge anyone may make a quality movie.but from the passag...
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Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r intention is clear from his suggestion that they recruit inexperienced directo...
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Line 2, column 679, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estion that they recruit inexperienced director and crew member to save many wh...
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Line 2, column 730, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'give' or 'be given'?
Suggestion: give; be given
...and crew member to save many which will given to the actor and unionized crew for the...
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Line 2, column 827, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... work.but this way a good quality movie cant be make. but on the other hand if auth...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...way a good quality movie cant be make. but on the other hand if author suggest tha...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... movie smoothly and having less error. so the position of the author is very weak...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...e fund rising issue and he should think other wise for ensuring quality
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'talking about', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265306122449 0.25644967241 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115646258503 0.0836205057962 138% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340136054422 0.0520304965353 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646258503401 0.0272364105082 237% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.125424944231 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0646258503401 0.0416121511921 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57352291889 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.026700313972 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108843537415 0.113004496875 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.0255425247493 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102040816327 0.0127820249294 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1695.0 2731.13054187 62% => OK
No of words: 290.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84482758621 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310344827586 0.378187486979 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21724137931 0.287650121315 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137931034483 0.208842608468 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0862068965517 0.135150697306 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57352291889 2.79052419416 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 207.018472906 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424137931034 0.469332199767 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.2496657368 52.1807786196 77% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.039408867 20% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 72.5 23.2022227129 312% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 261.979364645 57.7814097925 453% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 423.75 141.986410481 298% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.5 23.2022227129 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.724660767414 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.58251231527 391% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 94.224137931 51.9672348444 181% => OK
Elegance: 1.69230769231 1.8405768891 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333376140251 0.441005458295 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.353780318345 0.135418324435 261% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105394525027 0.0829849096947 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.75541673429e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.25284604206 0.193483328276 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037448662027 0.0970749176394 39% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374552903011 0.42659136922 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109007628036 0.0774707102158 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25284604206 0.312017818177 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037448662027 0.0698173142475 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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