Namen and Roscoe which are known as high-end fashion and affordable fashion department stores respectively, plan to open a branch in the suburb of Salem where there is an increase of population and median income. Namen executives think that as income increase, people will spend more money on clothing, while Roscoe people argue that affordable clothing will be more profitable as it fits more suburbs area. However, to decide which recommendation is better we will need to answer these three questions.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Namen and Roscoe which are known as high-end fashion and affordable fashion department stores respectively, plan to open a branch in the suburb of Salem where there is an increase of population and median income. Namen executives think that as income increase, people will spend more money on clothing, while Roscoe people argue that affordable clothing will be more profitable as it fits more suburbs area. However, to decide which recommendation is better we will need to answer these three questions.
First of all, we need to know the reason there are a growing population and an increased median income. There are many reasons that could cause this, and knowing this will be helpful to evaluate the Namen and Roscoe recommendation. For example, there might be an increase in population and income because there is a new big textile company that opened in the suburbs. This will cause most of the people in the suburb to not buy clothing in either Namen or Roscoe as the company most likely will be their competitor. There might also the possibility of opening of a new company like Amazon that recently moved to suburb from Seattle and this might be beneficial toward the opening of Namen stores as the Amazon employees will have lots of money to spend. So, to know which companies will profit more in the area, they will need to have information why there is an increase in median income and population.
Secondly, even though there is increase in median income, there is the possibility that people still won't spend more money on clothing. For instance, the median income increase might be due to inflation which also causes everything from housing, appliance, and food to also increase in price which will cause people not spending more on clothing. If the above scenario is true, it will be a bad idea for Namen to open a new store in that neighborhood.
Lastly, the stores will need to know what kind of clothing did the suburbs community wear daily. This is because different communities might have different preferences of clothings and assuming that because it is in suburb it will be family-oriented might be completely wrong and will cause the stores to lose money. For instance, Davis city which is a suburb has half the population of students and students preference of clothing won't be family-oriented and will prefer new-fashioned and affordable clothing
In conclusion, to evaluate whether Namen or Roscoe recommendation is better we will need to answer these three questions before opening a branch in the suburb.
Namen and Roscoe which are known as high-end fashion and affordable fashion department stores respectively, plan to open a branch in the suburb of Salem where there is an increase of population and median income. Namen executives think that as income increase, people will spend more money on clothing, while Roscoe people argue that affordable clothing will be more profitable as it fits more suburbs area. However, to decide which recommendation is better we will need to answer these three questions.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 510 350
No. of Characters: 2493 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.752 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.888 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.633 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 175 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.422 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.737 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.124 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will spend more money on clothing, while Roscoe people argue that affordable clot...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suburbs'' or 'suburb's'?
Suggestion: suburbs'; suburb's
...will be more profitable as it fits more suburbs area. However, to decide which recommen...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...most of the people in the suburb to not buy clothing in either Namen or Roscoe as t...
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Line 19, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will spend more money on clothing, while Roscoe people argue that affordable clot...
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Line 19, column 396, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'suburbs'' or 'suburb's'?
Suggestion: suburbs'; suburb's
...will be more profitable as it fits more suburbs area. However, to decide which recommen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 32.0 12.9520958084 247% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 508.0 441.139720559 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03346456693 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71792943236 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342519685039 0.468620217663 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 806.4 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2335933563 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.055555556 119.503703932 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 23.324526521 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.70786347227 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404724531859 0.218282227539 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181800575813 0.0743258471296 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.246306806637 0.0701772020484 351% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277737845176 0.128457276422 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187241408231 0.0628817314937 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.3799401198 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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