Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
In legends and stories heroes have been known as someone strong, reliable, and perfect. The prompt claim that in today society, living man or woman can not be regarded as a hero anymore because everyone reputation will be dragged down by critical and widespread media. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this claim and argue that some people could still be regarded as hero even with the critical media evaluation because of three reason.
To begin, in the present, ‘hero’ could be viewed differently by different people. Some people will see someone as hero if he/she did something beneficial to others, while others might be regarded as hero because he/she makes some breakthrough in some field. For example, firefighters are considered by hero by many people as they are saving lives while putting themselves on danger. While some scientists such as Tasuku Honjo is known as hero by some as he makes breakthrough on cancer treatment.
Even if media always try to publicize any fault of public figure, media tend to not focused too much on too much on the figure that have done ‘good’ deed that regarded as hero. For instances, when media found out that one of the featured firefighter that have saved lives previously to have failing grades and messy life, as long as the firefighter does not implicated on serious crime such as murder or rape, media tend to avoid publicize the ‘hero’ publics life as even if people find out their “hero” have did some bad stuff, most people nowadays understand that no one in the world could be perfect and when someone have contributed greatly to humanity, he/she will always remembered as hero. Beside that, when media publicize the private scandal of people regarded as hero, there are potential backfire from the public and some cases media could be sued and force to apologize
Lastly, in some society where media is highly controlled, hero figures could easily made with censorship of media, For example, Deng Xiaoping who is regarded as hero in China as he is known as the ‘Architect of Modern China’ and the one that lead China industrial revolution, also been implicated in some incident such as the Tiananmen square incident that could even him labeled as mass murderer. However, due to highly regulated media, this matter is not well known by Chinese community and cause majority people in china still considered Deng as hero.
Of course, some argue that media could not be controlled and always try to make a great deal of someone short coming and cause the downfall of their reputation. However, when media is highly regulated or when the person that regarded as ‘hero’ good deed surpass their short coming, media tend to avoid publishing the ‘hero’ short coming as it could backfire to the media itself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'implicate'
Suggestion: implicate
...fe, as long as the firefighter does not implicated on serious crime such as murder or rape...
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Line 9, column 540, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...le find out their 'hero' have did some bad stuff, most people nowadays un...
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Line 9, column 651, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...world could be perfect and when someone have contributed greatly to humanity, he/she...
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Line 9, column 708, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remember'
Suggestion: remember
...greatly to humanity, he/she will always remembered as hero. Beside that, when media public...
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Line 9, column 830, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'backfires'?
Suggestion: backfires
...e regarded as hero, there are potential backfire from the public and some cases media co...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...y controlled, hero figures could easily made with censorship of media, For example, ...
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Line 17, column 105, Rule ID: SHORT_COMING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcoming'?
Suggestion: shortcoming
...ays try to make a great deal of someone short coming and cause the downfall of their reputat...
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Line 17, column 279, Rule ID: SHORT_COMING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcoming'?
Suggestion: shortcoming
...apos;hero' good deed surpass their short coming, media tend to avoid publishing the &ap...
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Line 17, column 345, Rule ID: SHORT_COMING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shortcoming'?
Suggestion: shortcoming
...o avoid publishing the 'hero' short coming as it could backfire to the media itsel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2382.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06808510638 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76180129645 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465957446809 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.368734908 60.3974514979 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.230769231 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1538461538 23.4991977007 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240077827784 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101344756883 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712303244993 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151614991772 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650948749195 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.