Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is
heroes or heroines are always idolized and honored by people; since we were young as kids, we are enamored by the great super hero characters created by Marvel, such as super man, Spider man; till grown up, the fascination towards heroes is undiminished, people start adoring real-life heroes and heroines, a political figure who prosperous a nation; a war hero who fights for righteousness and sport stars who bring trophies back home. Contingent on the endless adulation and forever-sung panegyric of heroes and heroines, some sociologists pointed that, “the best way to understand the character of a society is to exam the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.”
I disagree with the statement; their characters cannot determine the character of the entire society as these people will have their own individual characteristics that cannot reflect the characters of all the people in the society; moreover, the reason of people regarding certain people as their heroes and heroines is that these heroes have done tremendous achievements that standing out that nobody else could parallel, therefore, the form of existence of heroes and heroines are the idealized form in society, the ultimately beacon that people look up to, certainly is the best standard to represent characters of general population of society.
one might argue that heroes are regarded as by people; and the merits recognized by people could represent the merits that people believes in society, therefore, heroes could be the representative of the whole society. To understand the character of the society is to understand the existing merits among general population; the idealized merits shown in one individual, though being appreciated by general population, is not representable as general merits of society.
The great movie “schindler's list” is based on real stories. oskar schindler was a German industrialist, affiliated with nazi Party during WWII. he saved over 1200 jews during the Holocaust though employing them into his factories. he was recognized as a hero by jews and even by local people in that contemporary society. His behaviors are highly-adored. could anyone say that the characters that oskar schindler has represent the nazi Germany during the World war II, even contemporary society admired what he did?
Not only merits of heroes could not determine the merits of the society; there are setbacks of heroes also are not representative. tiger woods, the great american Golfer, regarded as hero by americans by his extraordinary accomplishments in golf. However, later in his career, scandals were revealed, that he has multiple relationships with different women; though his reputation is impeded, more or less, by the scandal, he still regarded as a hero. The demeanor that conduct by woods has shown another side of character of his, but this negative character also cannot be reflected as common character of the society.
Imagine if people use characters of heroes to examine the characters of society, what the outcome would be. there are many individuals that regarded as hero, each of them will have their own characters; for example, tiger woods is diligent but not loyal, at the same time, Bill belicheck, the coach of new England Patriots who is also regarded as a hero, the greatest coach of all time, falling love with college girlfriend and being loyal to her ever since. is the loyalty of belicheck or the unloyalty of woods the character of the society. heroes all have their own distinguished characters, by simply apply their characters into the character of society is fallacious.
In view of the above, it can easily be concluded that the character of a society and that of the people idolized by the society are not related in any way whatsoever. The character of the heroes and heroines is not an indication of the character of the society that has chosen them.
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...er of the society that has chosen them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3345.0 2235.4752809 150% => OK
No of words: 642.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21028037383 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92098563887 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443925233645 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1056.6 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.097494885 60.3974514979 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.25 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128616465741 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419005359507 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337098825594 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737428120374 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289355775864 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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