Our school is the best choice for students considering a career in theatre. First, our school does not require an audition and encourages applicants of all acting experience levels to apply. Second, our students are trained in all major schools of acting methods. Finally, many of our graduates have gone on to achieve acting roles in Broadway productions and Hollywood films.
So, the acting is the good profession. But it’s not for all time. Schools are choose for students considering a career in theatre. But not all time study is also important for the study. our school does not require an audition and encourages applicants of all acting experience levels to apply. Not all time the all students mind are not same some students are also required the audition and its good for the experience and good to your acting confidence. Second, our students are trained in all major schools of acting methods. So, in this statement the ating is not important feelings and emotion are also important. So, im agree with this statement but not all time, acting is good for the students but study is also required.
First, the school is best choice for students considering a career in theatre. but study is also required for the student future and career. But some time our school does not required an audition and encourages application of all acting experience level to apply. In this case audition is also required for the new and tyro students. Because “more practise is make men perfect” so the audition is mainly required for the students in our schools.And then the students experience level and confidence level is also increase.
Second, our students are trained in all major school of acting methods. Some major school are tech the acting methods step by step and its teach to experienced person so the new students are easily teach them. So, it’s a good for the students. But study is also important for the students. Because acting is good for the future but study is also important for the career and profession.
So, finally the students are teach the acting from the some particular school and academy then its good for the experience. Then these student is going to audition and more practice is done for the contestant and his or her is achieve to the acting medal and chance to Bollywood, Hollywood, Tollywood etc. But those place are also checking the acting, feelings, expression etc. its also check the education. So, the school are tech both are required for the student. After completing the study the students are get admit to the some major acting school and get training.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 1789 1500
No. of Different Words: 123 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.671 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.364 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.004 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.905 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.543 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...it's not for all time. Schools are choose for students considering a career in th...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
... study is also important for the study. our school does not require an audition and...
^^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...y is also required. First, the school is best choice for students considering a caree...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...udents considering a career in theatre. but study is also required for the student ...
^^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...reer. But some time our school does not required an audition and encourages application ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...equired for the students in our schools.And then the students experience level and ...
^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...d person so the new students are easily teach them. So, it's a good for the stud...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...fession. So, finally the students are teach the acting from the some particular sch...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... students are teach the acting from the some particular school and academy then its ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
... then its good for the experience. Then these student is going to audition and more practice ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ne for the contestant and his or her is achieve to the acting medal and chance to Bolly...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 529, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...study the students are get admit to the some major acting school and get training. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.9520958084 0% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 11.1786427146 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 13.6137724551 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 382.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87958115183 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53316181912 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 204.123752495 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.342931937173 0.468620217663 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.67365269461 418% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.728764794 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.56 119.503703932 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.28 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.581032142114 0.218282227539 266% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217883319777 0.0743258471296 293% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199964273595 0.0701772020484 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420868968007 0.128457276422 328% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134697605876 0.0628817314937 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.3799401198 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.32208582834 83% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 12.3882235529 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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