"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
It seems pretty obvious that reducing time for weather and local news during night and devoting the same for only national news could cause a lot of complaints from the viewers and also loss of revenues. But there are several factors that needs to be considered before switching back to old strategy
We need to check how may complaints are there for the same reason. Are the complaints coming up from same group of people or not. It could be possible that there there are bunch of 10-20 people who are complaining again and again for the same reason while others are interested watching the national news and there's no complain from them.
Also we should know approximately how many viewers are covered in the respective station and how many of them watch these shows. For example if i say in X Y Z city , there 1000 people out of which only 50 people watch late night shows and hardly 10 -20 people are complaining regarding weather and local news, this shouldn't be a problem but on the other side if there lot of people may be 3-400, then it counts a lot.Also there are people that stick to their friends or family members, so even if one got a problem, the whole group start making a chaos.
Now, with respect to the cancellation of contracts of local business who advertise during late night programs, we should know the reason for the cancellation is it because of the complains or because of the fee being charged. May be there advertisements are not good enough or they have come up with new strategies.
We should also know the number of viewers who have unsubscribed our program, If the count is too low then it shouldn't affect the advertisements as people are still watching it. Also if there are other television stations who are offering them contracts at a low price then they will obviously cancel contracts.
Reviews, survey of the number of people watching these programs, rating could really help us in making our next move. There could be lot of people who prefer watching national news as local news are covered during our day life. People are much interested in news related national changes, policies etc which could help them to stay and survive this competing world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there
...eople or not. It could be possible that there there are bunch of 10-20 people who are compl...
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Suggestion: bunches
... could be possible that there there are bunch of 10-20 people who are complaining aga...
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...terested watching the national news and theres no complain from them. Also we shoul...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ws and theres no complain from them. Also we should know approximately how many ...
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...em. Also we should know approximately how many viewers are covered in the resp...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... them watch these shows. For example if i say in X Y Z city , there 1000 people o...
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...hows. For example if i say in X Y Z city , there 1000 people out of which only 50 ...
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... regarding weather and local news, this shouldnt be a problem but on the other side if t...
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...ople may be 3-400, then it counts a lot.Also there are people that stick to their fr...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ople may be 3-400, then it counts a lot.Also there are people that stick to their fr...
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...rogram, If the count is too low then it shouldnt affect the advertisements as people are...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ements as people are still watching it. Also if there are other television stations ...
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...ople are much interested in news related national changes, policies etc which cou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226277372263 0.25644967241 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.182481751825 0.15541462614 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851581508516 0.0836205057962 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0656934306569 0.0520304965353 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0510948905109 0.0272364105082 188% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119221411192 0.125424944231 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0583941605839 0.0416121511921 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44001802418 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.014598540146 0.026700313972 55% => OK
Particles: 0.00243309002433 0.001811407834 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.0705596107056 0.113004496875 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267639902676 0.0255425247493 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.029197080292 0.0127820249294 228% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2198.0 2731.13054187 80% => OK
No of words: 388.0 446.07635468 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66494845361 6.12365571057 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301546391753 0.378187486979 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193298969072 0.287650121315 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14175257732 0.208842608468 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0747422680412 0.135150697306 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44001802418 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 207.018472906 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489690721649 0.469332199767 104% => OK
Word variations: 52.6925492581 52.1807786196 101% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.039408867 65% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8461538462 23.2022227129 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2182191487 57.7814097925 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.076923077 141.986410481 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8461538462 23.2022227129 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.724660767414 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.58251231527 363% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.1760507534 51.9672348444 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.34959349593 1.8405768891 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323099925215 0.441005458295 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124933412165 0.135418324435 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.050722039623 0.0829849096947 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.632589143898 0.58762219726 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160844604142 0.147661913831 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144878324496 0.193483328276 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098246352682 0.0970749176394 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293834005712 0.42659136922 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0786712542883 0.0774707102158 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211124777083 0.312017818177 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818938200615 0.0698173142475 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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