The recommendation that the author has asserted has too many assumptions and after examining all the facts we can give a final conclusion around it.
Firstly, in the passage there is no mention about why the TV channel has replaced late night weather and local news with national news. In context with the above passage without the reason one cannot take a finial decision. There is a saying, "Grass is always greener on the other side", this means that again after a year if the TV channel receives complaints from its audience to restore the late night national news, it will do it and again revise the decision that it took a year ago. This process will go on forever and the audience will also suffer. Hence, the first thing the TV channel should do is to
Secondly, there is no mention in the passage about the number of complaints received by the TV channel. It might have been possible that in general the complaints might have been decreased and out of this small set the majority are for restoring the weather and local news. Also, in the previous year there might have been more complaints to bring in national news and replace the ongoing tv show. Hence without the previous years data on cannot take any decision.
Thirdly, the relation between losing business and bringing in national news is obscure. There is not enough evidence or supporting reasons to conclude that by bringing in national news at night the company is losing business. There might have been other reasons too for losing business. For example, at the same time some other popular event is going on and therefore the local business might have been attracted there for a temporary time.
Hence without providing enough evidence or reasons the TV channel cannot conclude that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and further loss due to revenues will be prevented.
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The recommendation that the author has asserted has too many assumptions and after examining all the facts we can give a final conclusion around it.
Description: A verb, past participle is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to asserted and has
Sentence: There is a saying, 'Grass is always greener on the other side', this means that again after a year if the TV channel receives complaints from its audience to restore the late night national news, it will do it and again revise the decision that it took a year ago.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to night and national
Sentence: Hence, the first thing the TV channel should do is to
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by an End of sentence
Suggestion: Refer to to
Sentence: It might have been possible that in general the complaints might have been decreased and out of this small set the majority are for restoring the weather and local news.
Description: The tag an adjective is not usually followed by the
Suggestion: Refer to general and the
Sentence: Hence without the previous years data on cannot take any decision.
Description: The token on is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to on and cannot
Sentence: Hence without providing enough evidence or reasons the TV channel cannot conclude that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and further loss due to revenues will be prevented.
Description: The word due is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to due
Sentence: Firstly, in the passage there is no mention about why the TV channel has replaced late night weather and local news with national news.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In context with the above passage without the reason one cannot take a finial decision.
Error: finial Suggestion: final
Sentence: There is a saying, 'Grass is always greener on the other side', this means that again after a year if the TV channel receives complaints from its audience to restore the late night national news, it will do it and again revise the decision that it took a year ago.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It might have been possible that in general the complaints might have been decreased and out of this small set the majority are for restoring the weather and local news.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Also, in the previous year there might have been more complaints to bring in national news and replace the ongoing tv show.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: tv Suggestion: me
Sentence: Thirdly, the relation between losing business and bringing in national news is obscure.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: There is not enough evidence or supporting reasons to conclude that by bringing in national news at night the company is losing business.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Hence without providing enough evidence or reasons the TV channel cannot conclude that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news will attract more viewers and further loss due to revenues will be prevented.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
Read a good grammar book.
samples:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 326 350
No. of Characters: 1532 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.249 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.699 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.293 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 104 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.733 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.605 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.595 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.108 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst thing the TV channel should do is to Secondly, there is no mention in the pas...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...l news and replace the ongoing tv show. Hence without the previous years data on cann...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ing tv show. Hence without the previous years data on cannot take any decision. Th...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ttracted there for a temporary time. Hence without providing enough evidence or re...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as to, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 326.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85582822086 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39171958146 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475460122699 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7181524622 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.70786347227 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267169752769 0.218282227539 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904392523209 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750493127782 0.0701772020484 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137346949173 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616036919508 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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