"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The author claims that In order to attract more Vister to the program, and to shun loseing any further advertising profit, we should restrat the time devoted to weather and local news to its formal level. His Argument is not honest because people are more cursority in national news rather than its local news. I strongly disagree with the claim and find it illogical due to the below mentioned reasons:
First Argument of writer is Over the past year, they increase time in national news and less time to weather and local news. They raise the national news, they not grow the national bussiness advertment. For more Profit they should give ads of national bussiness rather than its local-bussiness ads. For Instance, In national Program viewers visting from whole country, So in this program local bussiness ads cannot work, for that they national advertsment work and make more revenue.
Second Arugement of author is, Most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our stations coverage of weather and local news. They gets compain but only from its neighbour local area not from ssroung the nation.
Next agrue of auther is, Local bussiness that used to adveritse during our late-night news program have just canceled theit advertising contracts with us. National news program has increase the time of their program, and reduce the time of local news. Not they have cancelled the the News Program. Next agrue is, company should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level for eschew the viewers.This agrue cannot make sense, for local folk they cannot change their program. Because from national program Tv company gets more Viewers and Contract of national bussiness ads.
In the whole, The author arugement the flaws as per i meantion the above the reasons. Tv Company should contract with national company to earn more revenue, and show national program for more viewers.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author claims that In order to attract more Vister to the program, and to shun loseing any further advertising profit, we should restrat the time devoted to weather and local news to its formal level.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: loseing Suggestion: losing
Error: restrat Suggestion: restart
Sentence: His Argument is not honest because people are more cursority in national news rather than its local news.
Error: cursority Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: They raise the national news, they not grow the national bussiness advertment.
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Error: advertment Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For more Profit they should give ads of national bussiness rather than its local-bussiness ads.
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Error: local-bussiness Suggestion: local business
Sentence: For Instance, In national Program viewers visting from whole country, So in this program local bussiness ads cannot work, for that they national advertsment work and make more revenue.
Error: visting Suggestion: visiting
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Error: advertsment Suggestion: advertisement
Sentence: They gets compain but only from its neighbour local area not from ssroung the nation.
Error: ssroung Suggestion: strong
Error: compain Suggestion: complain
Error: neighbour Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Next agrue of auther is, Local bussiness that used to adveritse during our late-night news program have just canceled theit advertising contracts with us.
Error: adveritse Suggestion: advertise
Error: auther Suggestion: author
Error: agrue Suggestion: agree
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: late-night Suggestion: late night
Error: theit Suggestion: theft
Sentence: Next agrue is, company should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level for eschew the viewers.This agrue cannot make sense, for local folk they cannot change their program.
Error: agrue Suggestion: agree
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Because from national program Tv company gets more Viewers and Contract of national bussiness ads.
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
Sentence: In the whole, The author arugement the flaws as per i meantion the above the reasons.
Error: meantion Suggestion: mention
Error: arugement Suggestion: argument
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 15 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 320 350
No. of Characters: 1571 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.229 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.909 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.259 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.616 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...overage of weather and local news. They gets compain but only from its neighbour loc...
^^^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... of local news. Not they have cancelled the the News Program. Next agrue is, company sh...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... of local news. Not they have cancelled the the News Program. Next agrue is, company sh...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...its former level for eschew the viewers.This agrue cannot make sense, for local folk...
^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rugement the flaws as per i meantion the above the reasons. Tv Company should con...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, for instance, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07210031348 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32395619539 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46394984326 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9726423761 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425034001889 0.218282227539 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171189903089 0.0743258471296 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111766156731 0.0701772020484 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243943255664 0.128457276422 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936757251172 0.0628817314937 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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