SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
SuperCorp's decision to move its headquarters from Middlesburg to Corporateville can be lauded as one of the best decisions by this company.
Recently, a surge has been observed in the number of homeowners in Corporateville. This fact in itself hints how good Corporateville must be to reside at. Facilities like water and electicity supplies might be better and cheaper therefore people are genuinely preferring this location. So any move to shift from the Middlesburg are to Corporateville is clear. Also, if there is a surge in population employs will find more people to interact and socialize with at Corporateville, which is a good thing for a healthy employee environment and in turn the productivity of the company.
Besides, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area. Many employees who cannot afford such expenses, as an employee survey confirmed it, do not wish to stay in such an area. They prefer a non urban area where food and living standards are not as costly. Moreover, there are less taxes to be paid at Corporateville than Middlesburg, thus again making it an obvious choice. On the whole, Corporateville is not only safer but also cheaper and suitable to the taste of the employees of Supercorp.
There can be situations when the above assumptions can be challenged. This challenge lies in the surge in number of homeowners itself. If the population at Corporateville increases at great rates, then there will be less resources for everyone. This means prices of everyday necessities will rise. For example, expensive electricity or water supplies etc. Also, the managing body can impose more taxes for the maintenance of the society. Again this will be an added on cost on the Supercorp employees.
Therefore, the decision of the Supercorp to shift to Coporateville is clear and justifiable but there can be future ramifications which must be accounted for in advance.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
it is out of topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1547 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.006 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.124 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.328 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... be better and cheaper therefore people are genuinely preferring this location. So any move to shift fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 309.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15533980583 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19419279102 2.78398813304 115% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550161812298 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4145768696 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8421052632 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.70786347227 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194648698408 0.218282227539 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655887326756 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063339947394 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120138078841 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586956437087 0.0628817314937 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.3799401198 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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