Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Railways perform a pivoting role in driving the economy of a country. Therefore some people may argue that the governments should be spending on developing railways rather than roads. However, despite the usefulness of the rail links, I strongly disagree with the above argument and this essay shall try to explain why is it so.
The foremost factor affecting the transportation layout in and around a region is its topology. It is already a very difficult, costly and time consuming task to build roads, let alone laying tracks over high mountain ranges and inclement weather conditions, elevation of the mountain etc only add up to the problems faced by workers there. In such conditions it makes far more sense to spend money on constructing good roads for smoother transportation, since they can be constructed in a relatively shorter time frame and less effort.
Furthermore, the inherit problem with the railways is that they can only move between set stations and therefore cannot reach every place within a city. This means that besides having a well laid out railway line structure, we will still need to spend huge amounts on constructing roads to connect the inner city. Hence relying on railways instead of roads is not going to prove very useful especially in small towns where there are not enough convenient spots to build a railway station.
Conclusively, even though the usability of the rail road links is inarguable especially when it comes to carrying heavy loads over very long distances, yet we cannot ignore the fact that roads are still required to carry out any major or minor transportation operation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08518518519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73177964474 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67037037037 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4731031644 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179241246039 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693957538644 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078097791301 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104473146822 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100615573948 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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