In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In orther to assure excellent growth opportunities in any field, proffessional leadership is indispensible. Oftentimes, newly selected leader needs several years of adjustement to previously unknown environment. While some people claims that five years is sufficient period for one person to be in charge, it is careful evaluation of accomplishents that should be the decisive factor whether to prolong his/her contract or not.
Taking politics first, it is common in many countries to run presidential ellections every five years. Here, the president's work is evaluated by millions of citizens. If people with the right to vote decide that the last presidential term was satisfying, they might decide to elect him/her again. Most probably, if there was significant progress in many projects, the next years would be sucessful too.
Although the president may be reelected and rule the country again, it is evaluation of his/her work that should be done in order he can be a head of the country again. Turning to business and education, it is very hard to show off your abilities in a very short time. At first the newly selectad chief has to learn new environment. Although some may claim that after five years those in power should step down, aquired abilities and adaptation to work in a given, specific environment is beneficial for further work. Nevertheless, evaluation after five years period is indispensible to assure proper development of a given unit.
To recapitulate, in some circumstances executive board should prolong the contract of a person in charge, provided that careful evaluation of his/her performance was made and there are strong arguments supporting his/her position for the next five years.
Sentence: While some people claims that five years is sufficient period for one person to be in charge, it is careful evaluation of accomplishents that should be the decisive factor whether to prolong his/her contract or not.
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Sentence: In orther to assure excellent growth opportunities in any field, proffessional leadership is indispensible.
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Sentence: Oftentimes, newly selected leader needs several years of adjustement to previously unknown environment.
Error: adjustement Suggestion: adjustment
Sentence: While some people claims that five years is sufficient period for one person to be in charge, it is careful evaluation of accomplishents that should be the decisive factor whether to prolong his/her contract or not.
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Sentence: Taking politics first, it is common in many countries to run presidential ellections every five years.
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Sentence: Most probably, if there was significant progress in many projects, the next years would be sucessful too.
Error: sucessful Suggestion: successful
Sentence: At first the newly selectad chief has to learn new environment.
Error: selectad Suggestion: selected
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