Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

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Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Dissuading students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed is far away from have-to-do tasks of educational institutions.

Although discouraging students could better allocate education resources, release students from frustrations, and maximize possible contribution students could deliver in future, this action is not worthful.

First, education institutions get huge and vast priority tasks, while the expected returns of this kind of action is little than a issue of concern. So many problems are unsolved yet and they should mind their critical business.

Second, the false positive and trun negative rated could be certainly high. Thus, for one thing, educational institute should not have students take their unreliable decision; foe the other, the risk, the estimated lost per failure guess could be so high that education institute can hardly cover. Would a school conpensate a student for a wrong advice changing one's life? There is no such case exists.

After all, dissuading students from pursuing fields of study unlikly to succeed is too over that educational institute should only keep these as suggestions.

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Sentence: Although discouraging students could better allocate education resources, release students from frustrations, and maximize possible contribution students could deliver in future, this action is not worthful.
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Sentence: Second, the false positive and trun negative rated could be certainly high.
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Sentence: Would a school conpensate a student for a wrong advice changing one's life?
Error: conpensate Suggestion: compensate

Sentence: After all, dissuading students from pursuing fields of study unlikly to succeed is too over that educational institute should only keep these as suggestions.
Error: unlikly Suggestion: unlikely

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