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"The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend."
"""Of the two leading real estate firms in our town-Adams Realty and Fitch Realty-Adams Realty is"
"clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster"
"as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year,"when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell"
"your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."""
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Sentence: To bolster this assertation, he/she also mentions homes listed with Adams sell faster than Fitch.
Error: assertation Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To further supply, the letter also cites that he/she could sell home sooner by Admas reallity.
Error: reallity Suggestion: reality
Sentence: The author assime that for selling home he/she must use either Fitch or Adams reallity, but not both.
Error: reallity Suggestion: reality
Error: assime Suggestion: assume
Sentence: However, he/she provides no evidence that for selling better the house must be chosen between two cours of actions rathar than following both.
Error: rathar Suggestion: rather
Error: cours Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Lacking any such evidence, it is entirely possible that implementing both reallities would help to sell the house sooner with higher price than implementing either one alone.
Error: reallities Suggestion: realities
Sentence: Assuming that at one time he/she could sell a house sooner with higher price, the author inferes the similar condition today and in the furure.
Error: inferes Suggestion: infers
Error: furure Suggestion: future
Sentence: Perhaps, the same course of action might be in effective in selling house with Fitch agancy due to geolical differences between two houses.
Error: geolical Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: agancy Suggestion: agency
Sentence: If it turns out, for example, that the house he/she sold with Adams had better area, short distance to public transportations and better consition to name just a few, then the author's conclusion is uncompelling at best.
Error: consition Suggestion: condition
Sentence: It is possible that Admas gets higher comission from sellers.
Error: comission Suggestion: commission
Sentence: If so, even if we assume that he/she can sell a house sooner with Adams agancy, he/she has to pay more fee.
Error: agancy Suggestion: agency
Sentence: Before I can determine the extent to which the study supports the conclusion, I really need this essential information about what percentage of selling fee Adams and Fitch realities get to draw the conclusion that selloing with Admas reallity is better than selling with Fitch.
Error: selloing Suggestion: selling
Error: reallity Suggestion: reality
Sentence: In sum, the letter relies on vauge terms, questionable sample and doubtful assumptions that render it unconvincing and ill grounded as it stands.
Error: vauge Suggestion: vague
Sentence: To power the conclusion that he/she can sell at higher price, it also needs to supply information respecting comission fee and other possible costs.
Error: comission Suggestion: commission
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No. of Spelling Errors: 17 2
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Score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 17 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 486 350
No. of Characters: 2313 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.695 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.759 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.395 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.487 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.542 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5