16. Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
As per the topic, the author mentions the opinion of some portion of people that for being a effective leader, one must yield to public opinions but a large portion of people believe that for being an effective leader, one must not go away from his/her principles. I agree with the first sentence of the issue provided but conditional on the second sentence.great leaders proced themselves effective by being attentive to public opinions rather than being bound to the principles. if the public opinuion is not best suitable for the situation of tyhe country then one must rely on the principlkes and act accordingly.
mahatma gandhi, the great social ;leader of India, fought with the rising circumstancesd for the people and struggled as per the public opinion. For the enhancement of the leadership and trusrt, one leader must go upon public opinions and should work for the welfare of the people.
Another example for the second sentence can be taken of The great king of Nepal, prithvi Nararyan shah, who unified the small fragmented statesd of the country into the one solid nation. This has been possible because of his determination on his own principles and objectives of unifying the small states into a single nation being irrespective to the public opinion. if he had relied upon the public opinion the he would not have been successful in the consolidation of the nation. thus, he did not leave the track opf unifying the states amnd thus his principles mader him The great leader of the nation. However, sometimes being relied only on the principles might also brinbg hindrances in one's goals and priorities.
From the above examples of mahatma gandhi and The great king prithvi Narayan shah, i got to be agreed totally with the first sentence and conditional with the second sentence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...her than being bound to the principles. if the public opinuion is not best suitabl...
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...e principles. if the public opinuion is not best suitable for the situation of tyhe coun...
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...n the principlkes and act accordingly. mahatma gandhi, the great social ;leader of Ind...
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...ing irrespective to the public opinion. if he had relied upon the public opinion t...
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing irrespective to the public opinion. if he had relied upon the public opinion t...
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...f he had relied upon the public opinion the he would not have been successful in the c...
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...ful in the consolidation of the nation. thus, he did not leave the track opf unifyin...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'being'.
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...he great leader of the nation. However, sometimes being relied only on the principles might als...
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...nciples might also brinbg hindrances in ones goals and priorities. From the above e...
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...nd The great king prithvi Narayan shah, i got to be agreed totally with the first...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9504950495 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63734574695 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9065144642 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283840343689 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111501831556 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976960843898 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170349998985 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120807134303 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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