An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly affected patients. Through gaining such access, the patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The above recommendation is based on logical grounds and I firmly support it because every patient requires a doctor at the earliest and in the easiest manner, therefore providing them access to the doctors will help in fast treatment.
Firstly, everyone does not have the same financial status but all of us need to recover from the diseases and this can only be done by choosing the medical officer of our choice. The govenment and private doctors should be easily approachable, the system that allows ill people to do such a thing, assures that the right individual would be selected after studying the demands of the person.
Secondly, In India many hospitals follow the practice to complete the formalities before providng healthcare to the victim for example if the sick guy has been suffering from some accidental injury which involves police then he/she needs to wait for the officers to reach the scene and question the victim and most of these cases result in death, such incidents are a result of keeping medical facilities less accessible .
Now, a lot of reviews against the stated suggestion are going to be provided, like patients have negligible knowledge about the diseases they face due to which many times these individuals are motivated by different things as less cost, less time to live in hospital, etc. On this the government should provide basic medical knowledge and facilities to all of us.
In a nutshell, easy access to doctors is very essential for everyone as we all have the right to live and get proper treatment to cure ourselves and there should be no barriers to healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96336996337 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58894984563 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6633131532 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.571428571 118.986275619 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171117852544 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757462940585 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433174274126 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933357642452 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416968984576 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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