“An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the medical condition."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain the reason for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Treatment for a patient is a very challenging task, not only for the doctors, but for the patients too. Having faith on a treatment done by a doctor who comes at an expensive cost is always a confusing decision to take. Though having access to the doctor's past records may ease the patient's trouble to some extent, there are a lot of challenges that need to be tackled for it. And they should know that doctor is treating them well.
Strong Reason that i am agree with this is some doctors are avarice. They are not treating their patient they are not serving for them but they are just professional and they want only money. Money is the big reason for them. So that they don't care about patient, they just do their work. In such content all the doctors are not this type of greedy and professional. Some are very kind and generous. This kind of doctors just wanted to serve people they don't have any other thought in their mind.
For example, if a patient has some bone related problem he should go to orthopedist. Erudite people go to an Mbbs Physician they give some advice and give medicine. But actual problem is not known to that doctor. Physician will suggest patient some tests and reports. This medical reports and tests like X-ray, blood tests etc. all these are tests are very costly now a days. Poor people can't afford it. But a situation is related to body and medical so no one wants to take risk and they do this test as doctor suggests. Patient is unaware about what are the medical substance are their n medicine. So that if patient has doctor's record of treating he would better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the medical condition.
It has been scientifically proven that the mental state of a patient plays a significant role in the procedure of curing the illness. If the patients have an access to the past records of the doctor, looking at his success rate might increase his morale for him and given a psychological advantage. This will eventually speed up the process of curing. However, Doctor’s consulting fees are very high. So if a patient has record of doctor so that he can easily access it and choose a better doctor. By this if that doctor is not suitable for him he may go to other doctor who can treat him well. Now days medical situations are very critical situations and by this every person should take care and consult particular doctor for that particular situation.
To summarize, though a sense of transparency could be seen if the patient has access to the past records of a doctor, the cons outweigh the pros and it would not be a wise decision to do so.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eating them well. Strong Reason that i am agree with this is some doctors are ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...g them well. Strong Reason that i am agree with this is some doctors are avarice. ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...go to orthopedist. Erudite people go to an Mbbs Physician they give some advice an...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: X-ray
...ts. This medical reports and tests like X ray, blood tests etc. all these are tests a...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...tc. all these are tests are very costly now a days. Poor people can apos;t afford it. But ...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...all these are tests are very costly now a days. Poor people can apos;t afford it. But ...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...uring the illness. If the patients have an access to the past records of the doctor, look...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233644859813 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.164485981308 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0635514018692 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0635514018692 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0598130841121 0.0444667217837 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0971962616822 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0336448598131 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38704374155 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299065420561 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0018691588785 0.0016655270985 112% => OK
Determiners: 0.114018691589 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261682242991 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00747663551402 0.0148568991511 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2668.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 482.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53526970954 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313278008299 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201244813278 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.107883817427 0.200843997647 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0705394190871 0.132149295362 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38704374155 2.79330140395 85% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44398340249 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.0309491507 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6206896552 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.654137374 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 141.124799967 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6206896552 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.310344827586 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 36.745170983 51.4728631049 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.26623376623 1.64882698954 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406426172548 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0970772096435 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.085899222211 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.419727129927 0.547984918172 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160867373222 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126832731214 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110990054203 0.0892212321368 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363343034116 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502580006197 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284204799347 0.275328986314 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843840692571 0.0653680567796 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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