An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Healthcare is a very unorganized sector of the economy, where a lack of technology and data accessibility of available service lead to poor health care at end service consumer means patient. To improve it, we should make transparent the healthcare sector by tweak via the use of proper management and technology. By doing may improve healthcare, and we can achieve enormous growth in this section. To do that, we should organize available data, which can be easily accessible to the patient. It leads to an increase in the quality of healthcare.
By giving access to data related to the affected patient, the patient can see whether the doctor which going to treat is good or bad. It should be like a google rating for doctors in a more organized way. Where doctors get a rating from not only from there earlier performance of dealing with the patient but also rates of hospital-related expenses and cleanliness of the hospital taking consider. Let me give you an example of related to this: In India, there is one private company that helps patients and doctors to fight this problem. Which name is "Practo," this company check hospital and doctors on various parameter and give them rating according to that, where the patient also can book an appointment, see the rate of hospital and also give a rating according to that. It solved the problem of the patient; now, they can easily check whether the doctor is capable of handling the case or not.
This system can also be operated by the government to fight the problem of fake doctors in developing economies like India and Bangladesh, where the government can watch on doctors and their performance. It has been seen that there is a problem with fake educational degrees in developing nations. By organizing it, we can fight this problem in the healthcare sector.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...this problem. Which name is 'Practo,' this company check hospital and doctor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92282958199 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83189762016 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8666987663 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197566978152 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748369202008 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640948449356 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119182101998 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069325887902 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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