An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
People nowadays are so much concerned for their health, that they have became more vigilant for the bad practices happening around them. They want everything to be compliant with their issues. In this case, the issue is regarding that an ailing patient should have esay access to his or her doctor's record for treating similarly afflicted patient. In my view I agree with the statement state by the speaker.There are also some flaws in this issue like that of the privacy protection.
The thing is that if the doctors give access to patients then this can create a sense of confidence and relaxation to the patient in the period of his or her treatment. For example, many a times it happens in case of fatal diseases like cancer or type B hepatitis, the patients are so much concerned or anxious for their treatment that they want their treatment done from a skilled professional only. Because, it is the issue of their life and they want to get every information about the doctore who is going to treat them. In that case, the records of previous patients can give a patient much information and if the results of previous patients are good then, that gives trust to the patient for the process.
Also, in many cases like that of common diseases like dengue, malaria, jaundice or other diseases, the patients ask people around them regarding the results of that physician from whom they are thinking to get consultation. Patie4nts don't have much access in that case to the previous records but the recommendations from their previous patients can help in this regard.
It is the demand of the patient that he should be given "easy" access to the previous records, but, many a times a doctor hesitate to give that information regarding his or her previous patient to protect their privacy in case of diseaes in which the patients have diffidence or hesitation in sharing their records. For example, in the disease like AIDS, Gonorrhea, Syphillis or other sexually transmitted diseases the patients have a societal hesitation in sharing their previous regarding. In those cases, easy access is not possible. But, can be possible if the patient is really in a critical situation and the previous patient by communication with the doctor allows to share his or her records.
Thus, according to these circumstances an ailing patient should be given access to his or her doctors's record of treating similarly afflicted patients, but not the easy access.That will give the patient a relaxation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...cerned for their health, that they have became more vigilant for the bad practices hap...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...with the statement state by the speaker.There are also some flaws in this issue like ...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...his or her treatment. For example, many a times it happens in case of fatal diseases li...
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...thinking to get consultation. Patie4nts dont have much access in that case to the pr...
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Line 13, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...cess to the previous records, but, many a times a doctor hesitate to give that informat...
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Line 13, column 683, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sharing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sharing
...by communication with the doctor allows to share his or her records. Thus, accordi...
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Line 17, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thus, according to these circumstances an ailing patient should be given access...
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Line 17, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...icted patients, but not the easy access.That will give the patient a relaxation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus, for example, in many cases, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97630331754 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72593126144 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424170616114 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9843762878 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1333333333 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345370902952 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145456242865 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149556902248 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240532053985 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111764562601 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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