An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.
Doctors always have a very important hand in saving a person's life when that particular person in suffering from some disease.They only can help that person recovering from that disease.An ailing patient should have an access to his or her doctor's record.I do agree with this statement.Knowing about the past record of that doctor's success in curing some sort of disease will surely help another ailing patient suffering from the same disease to decide whether to take treatment from that particular doctor or not.
Doctor's always have their reputation based on how they perform during some critical surgeries.Their success rate is always seen that what are the chances that a patient wil survive after that surgery.Depending upon that, doctor's get their fame and then surely another patient suffering from that particular medical condition will get treated with that particular doctor.The first thing according to me that any patient sees before going to any doctor is that;how well that doctor is,how does that doctor perform in his or her speciality,how does treats his or her patients and the main thing what are his past record dealing with that particular disease.
Besides,according to me, doctor's reputation and past records are such things which could never be confidential.It will always depend upon the skill and intelligence of the doctor in his or her field.Depending upon that, patients are attracted towards that particular doctor to take treatment from him or her.For example,suppose a cardiologist is performing exceptionally well in curing disease related to heart,then patient suffering from disease related to heart are definitely going to take treatment from that doctor.Also people would suggest that the particular person should only take treatment from that specialist only because he has got a good fame and does well under critical situations and conditions.
In the final analysis,i would say that if a person does not know how a doctor is,then only way to know is to look at the past records of the doctor and to see how he or her treated and cured that medical conditon.According to me,Looking at that Only,a person suffering from similar condition should take treatment from that doctor.
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...ould take treatment from that doctor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, so, then, well, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25561797753 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97530524405 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455056179775 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 23.0359550562 386% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.873031902 60.3974514979 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 467.75 118.986275619 393% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 23.4991977007 379% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294092342619 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19677251158 0.0831039109588 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523265876895 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19677251158 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523265876895 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.8 14.1392134831 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.86 48.8420337079 -39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 12.1743820225 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.38706741573 131% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 11.2143820225 335% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 38.0 11.7820224719 323% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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