The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
the corporation should also take care of the general welfare of the nation, where they should donate some fixed percentage of their annual profits. it's the responsibility of the corporation to return to society from which they earn profits over the year. they can simply donate to government-approved NGO or they do it by themselves as well.
The corporation can help the government to achieve its vision by giving them fund or by supporting and implementing it on a ground level. let me give an example of the biggest private bank of India, which is the HDFC bank. who help the government to provide a toilet to every citizen of India, by building them and maintaining them for lifelong. they supported government vision by helping them. this is just only way towards the welfare of the nation.
Pollution is big problem for developing nation like India and Mexico. To solve this problem the government push the corporation to some extent, after all, every country wants to become a developed nation. but by tacking it to the next level, the corporation can reduce their carbon footprint and by using or recycling used plastic will help the nation to achieve sustainable development. let me give you an example: Flipkart is one of the biggest E-commerce company in India, who recently declared to take away plastic wrapping and boxes of the parcel after the consumer opens it. this is a very good decision considering the government push to help for saving an environment.
In conclusion: Though the corporation has to focus on the market, it's their primary responsibility towards the welfare of the nation, no matter how it will affect the balance sheet of the company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, after all, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92932862191 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84836340621 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0473599858 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108665568728 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414379752009 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304102914605 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679125406385 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144917563995 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.