It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
The social groups are very important for the human being as we evolve ourselves as social animal, who like to live with group. Earlier before thousand of years ago, we live in group to solve a problem and to hunt in group for safety. Without group we are just like enjured person, who not able to do things. So it’s very necessary to live in the group as human being.
Nowadays we dont need a group for huntting but to solve a problems and to fight with stress, that’s why group in your life is impoatant. Also to encourage you to achieve your goals the group member helps you alot. Your group member are nothing but your good friends. Sometimes it’s seen that human fails to select good friend or the group of friend, which leads to adoptions of bad habits. We like to spend time with somebody who thinks in same direction and who has same friends. As we like to be part of the group whos mind set is like you means your mindset is similar to every member of group. So we generally identified by the social group.
The social group may sometimes bottelneck for your growth in career or any field.I suggest you to be part of group, who are successful in their career. Because it’s seen that people in same group became like each other after sometime. So selecting group is also art, which help you to grow yourselves. Trying new group of people may help you to learn a new thing. The group of successfull people makes you think like them.
It’s correct that your identified by your social group,but selecting them is up to you.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...like to live with group. Earlier before thousand of years ago, we live in group to solve...
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Suggestion: don't
...the group as human being. Nowadays we dont need a group for huntting but to solve ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...;s why group in your life is impoatant. Also to encourage you to achieve your goals ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... encourage you to achieve your goals the group member helps you alot. Your group ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ame direction and who has same friends. As we like to be part of the group whos mi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...nds. As we like to be part of the group whos mind set is like you means your mindset...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... for your growth in career or any field.I suggest you to be part of group, who ar...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...hat your identified by your social group,but selecting them is up to you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5390070922 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26482229972 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492907801418 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4353293413 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2941176471 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.29411764706 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237417134864 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102464983918 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663076064597 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165288807022 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611440439975 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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